CCX-Kero Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 Just a card i came up with for a contest i was in. Its a really cool concept and i would appreciate some comments and suggestions on how to make it better. I took into consideration all of the suggestions and turned it down a little. I even added another clause so that it cannot attack the opponent directly. [center] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2365/155404.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand by returning all other cards in your hand to the Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. This card cannot attack your opponent Directly. When this card is Special Summoned Pick up the top 2 cards of your Deck and reveal them to your opponent. This card gains the following effects based on the cards that are drawn until your 2nd End Phase after this card's activation: *Monster: Increase the ATK of this card by 400. *Spell: Place 1 "Caliber Counter" on this card. If this card would be removed from the field by your opponent's card effect you can remove 1 "Caliber Counter" instead. *Trap: This card gains 1 additional attack. [spoiler=Old Version][img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2365/155404.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand by returning all other cards in your hand to the Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. When this card is Special Summoned Draw 2 cards from the deck and reveal them to your opponent. This card gains the following effects based on the cards that are drawn until your 2nd End Phase after this card's activation: *Monster: Increase the ATK of this card by 400. *Spell: Place 1 "Caliber Counter" on this card. If this card would be removed from the field by your opponent's card effect you can remove 1 "Caliber Counter" instead. *Trap: This card gains 1 additional attack.[/spoiler] [color="#FF0000"] * Just a little note about how the card works. The card's effect is cumulative in a sense. Meaning that if 2 monster cards are drawn with its effect the ATK will increase by 800 and not 400. Similarly 2 additional attacks if 2 traps and 2 counters if two spells. Also all effects wear off once the set time has passed that includes the counters. [/color] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from [b]your[/b] hand by returning all other cards in your hand to the Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. >>> this part is rather unacceptable ,but it makes this card is very easy to Summon. i suggest to make at least you have 5 cards, then you can activate this effect. When this card is Special Summoned, [b]d[/b]raw 2 cards from the[b] D[/b]eck and reveal them to your opponent. This card gains the following effects based on the cards drawn until your 2nd End Phase after this [b]effect[/b] activation: >> You just mist Caps and some words, acceptable *Monster: Increase the ATK of this card by 400.>>Good *Spell: Place 1 "Caliber Counter" on this card. If this card would be removed from the field by your opponent's card effect you can remove 1 "Caliber Counter" instead.>>maybe you can change it to removing 2 Counter instead of 1 *Trap: This card gains 1 additional attack [color="#FF0000"]this turn[/color]. >> you forgot to add the red part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CCX-Kero Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1299567930' post='5059667'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from [b]your[/b] hand by returning all other cards in your hand to the Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. >>> this part is rather unacceptable ,but it makes this card is very easy to Summon. i suggest to make at least you have 5 cards, then you can activate this effect. When this card is Special Summoned, [b]d[/b]raw 2 cards from the[b] D[/b]eck and reveal them to your opponent. This card gains the following effects based on the cards drawn until your 2nd End Phase after this [b]effect[/b] activation: >> You just mist Caps and some words, acceptable *Monster: Increase the ATK of this card by 400.>>Good *Spell: Place 1 "Caliber Counter" on this card. If this card would be removed from the field by your opponent's card effect you can remove 1 "Caliber Counter" instead.>>maybe you can change it to removing 2 Counter instead of 1 *Trap: This card gains 1 additional attack [color="#FF0000"]this turn[/color]. >> you forgot to add the red part [/quote] Thanx for the corrections. But in regards to the spell and trap effects ill leave that as they are because that how i intended the to be. After all these effects aren't permanent.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 then this card would be hard to defeated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 The img is good, however it doesn't really fit as a Effect Card. The name is ok. OCG is fixed. It's slightly OP. It has high swarming potential and using it after you play all the cards in your hand that you need might even profide you with a provit of 1 card. Perhaps try making it "Pick up the top 2 cards of your Deck" or revealing them, too make it less abusable. A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CCX-Kero Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1299598362' post='5060177'] The img is good, however it doesn't really fit as a Effect Card. The name is ok. OCG is fixed. It's slightly OP. It has high swarming potential and using it after you play all the cards in your hand that you need might even profide you with a provit of 1 card. Perhaps try making it "Pick up the top 2 cards of your Deck" or revealing them, too make it less abusable. A 8/10 [/quote] Thats for the suggestion. I tuned down the card a little so its less Op'ed now..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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