Niashi Inumaki

[Nishi-chan]

[center][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/1482/50908s.jpg[/img]
[color="#8B0000"][b]While this card is face-up on the field it's Attribute is also treated as DARK and FIRE. This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. If this card battles a Defense Postion monster with a DEF equal to this card's ATK, take control of that monster at the End Phase. Once per turn, you can select a face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's field. The selected monster's DEF becomes equal to this card's original ATK.[/b][/color]


Haven't made a card in a while. Correct my OCG? Please and thank you.
Picture is my original Niashi Inumaki. Artist unknown.[/center]

[MibeR]

While this card is face-up on the field [b]its [/b]Attribute is also treated as DARK and FIRE. This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. If this card battles a Defense [b]Position[/b] monster with a DEF equal to this card's ATK, take control of that monster [color="#FFFF00"]until[/color] the End Phase. Once per turn, you can select a face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's field. The selected monster's DEF becomes equal to this card's original ATK.

Yellow part is suggestion,

basically this card is overpowered. I mean this card is better than a Goyo if you didnt make it just until the End Phase, and if you attack only face-up Defense Position, you can take control of it. and attack once again with the controller monster

[Fusion X. Denver]

[quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1299567072' post='5059644']
While this card is face-up on the field [b]its [/b]Attribute is also treated as DARK and FIRE. This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. If this card battles a Defense [b]Position[/b] monster with a DEF equal to this card's ATK, take control of that monster [color="#FFFF00"]until[/color] the End Phase. Once per turn, you can select a face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's field. The selected monster's DEF becomes equal to this card's original ATK.

Yellow part is suggestion,

basically this card is overpowered. I mean this card is better than a Goyo if you didnt make it just until the End Phase, and if you attack only face-up Defense Position, you can take control of it. and attack once again with the controller monster
[/quote]

He summed it up pretty well, just add a comma after the first "field".
Good though for being so rusty