nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7511/376580.jpg[/img] Lore:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Dark Magician" from your field.If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell card,it returns to the field at the End Phase." This is my first one ^^ Please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 here's some update OCG tributing=Tributing Field=field Magic Card=Spell Card, and at the end there's an error. so post the card with the lore next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 Done .. thanks ^^ ..I never find my mistakes..now I think that is correct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 With all of DM's support, this is OP'd. Spell Lockdown should not be this easy to get. And why is there an attachment? Was that before you figured out how to post the card? Because they aren't allowed. Period Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 Ops sorry ...I was trying to learn how to post ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 No prob, it's just a forum rule that gets broken at least once every day. You should be fine though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 ok ..thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 you miss the latest field... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 isn't that just a fanart of the Normal Shonen Jump version of DM? Anyways, I agree, DM has lots of support and this card seems kind of unneccessary. We have Dark Magician of Chaos, Dark Paladin, and all those other DM-related monsters. Also about the name, I think when you include the level of the monster in its name, it has to have an effect similar to Level monsters. Like "this card cannot be special summoned except by sending one (same monster name) (lesser level) to the Graveyard first" And the effect of your opponent not being able to activate spell cards would be more fair if DM leve 9 was a little harder to summon. Maybe remove DM and 9 cards in your Graveyard from play.. I don't know, just a suggestion. Be more creative ^^ anyways, right now I give it 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1299687621' post='5062499'] We have Dark Magician of Chaos, Dark Paladin, and all those other DM-related monsters. [/quote] Those aren't really the support I was talking about. I was more talking about all the stuff you use to bring it out (Skilled DM), the generic vanilla support, and and the stuff that gives you massive field advantage with DM out (Dark Magic Attack). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 ok .. now you make me think ... well .. first the name ... I don't have any ideia for that ^^ ... second all the stuff.. maybe I should do some changes what you think if I change the part of negate Spell cards ... Like : "When your opponent active a Spell card,you can send one card of your hand to negate and destroy it" ??? ow ! if anyone have a good name ..I accept suggestions ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [quote name='nick05' timestamp='1299689711' post='5062561'] ok .. now you make me think ... well .. first the name ... I don't have any ideia for that ^^ ... second all the stuff.. maybe I should do some changes what you think if I change the part of negate Spell cards ... Like : "When your opponent active a Spell card,you can send one card of your hand to negate and destroy it" ??? ow ! if anyone have a good name ..I accept suggestions ^^ [/quote] The cost made this better, though I think it's been done irl. Try something that doesn't involve negating spell cards, don't get stuck on one thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 ok ... doing some changes ...... ^^ [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7511/376580.jpg[/img] new effect : "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Dark Magician" from your field.If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell card,it returns to the field at the End Phase." suggestions and comments ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 You can edit your first post instead of posting the new card. And I absolutely love how its effect gets around Bottomless Trap Hole Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 .... ok I edit my first one to ^^ .... but the Gandorator is right ... I need change this name .... But I can't think in another one .. I put level 9 just because his level is really 9 !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 "Dark Magician Lv 9" and please add lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 ok ... thanks for the comment ^^ ... i will put the lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 its not "Dark Magician Level 9" i think you mean "Dark Magician Lv 9" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1299718796' post='5063502'] its not "Dark Magician Level 9" i think you mean "Dark Magician Lv 9" [/quote] That is for the Lv monsters (Armed Dragon, Silent Swordsman, etc.) For this card it should not matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 well if LV put in then cards likel evel modification can be used and so on ... (1 example is go enough) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1299725676' post='5063742'] well if LV put in then cards likel evel modification can be used and so on ... (1 example is go enough) [/quote] That's why it shouldn't be LV. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 well it not up to us but to him/her lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 well ..for me it will still Level ^^ ... is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 It's way too UP as of now, with its hard summoning conditions. I think there was another monster with the same summoning conditions, and it was horrible. My idea of something with these conditions are: 3000/2600 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Dark Magician". Once per turn, negate the effect of 1 Spell OR Trap card your opponent activated. In the End of an End Phase in which this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 Spell Card to Special Summon it from your Graveyard. But I suppose it's pretty darn good for a first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick05 Posted March 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 do you think ? thanks ^^ ...well .. your ideia is good... but he still OP when I can Special Summon from my Graveyard just by sending a Spell card. but maybe I Put the other one: "Once per turn, negate the effect of 1 Spell OR Trap card your opponent activated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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