judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 ill start with stan and will see how many post i get on here if this is really popular i will add more cards i guess [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3286/248746f.jpg[/img] Stan Smith lore a cia agent who is married to smoking hot blonde who gave birth to his rebellious hippie daughter and a geeky son and he's been keeping a real alien that live on earth since the late 1940's (rosewell, new mexico) in his attic so what can possibllity go wrong ??? [img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/7126/248746b.jpg[/img] Francine Smith lore A wife and a mother with alot of problems that constantly happens around the house. [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/6356/248746o.jpg[/img] Steve Smith lore when "Stan Smith" and "Francine Smith" are on the Field you can Special Summon this Card when this Monster Destorys a Monster in Battle Special Summon from your deck, hand or, graveyard 1 lv 4 or lower Monster with "Smith" in its name in Face up Defense Postion during the End Phase your Opponent draw 2 Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 I think you need to work on your description a bit, just work on the grammar and spelling, capitalization, etc. I think you need a better picture as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more (ON TOPIC COMMENT) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
man_of_power05 Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 i think the idea of any american dad or family guy based cards is funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CR1ZZBY Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 [color=black]Is this supposed to be a joke card? If not, please don't make vanilla cards. >.<[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Not a joke card? OMFG. Everything about it is a joke. You don't even bother to put in proper grammer. "a cia agent who is married to smoking hot blonde..." So that is proper OCG? So If I went to my X-sabers, or my Blackwings, it would say "when you place this card on the field, marry a blonde, then have 2 kids. Then return your kids to the shop." I know you are going to say "But iam a Level 4!!! I need help!!!." Obviously if no one that is a level 4 or higher have posted here, is BECAUSE IT IS A JOKE. So next time you make a Pop-culture card, place a decent picture on it, get correct OCG, nothing that is a joke. Or just post it in the Joke Card thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CR1ZZBY Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300126549' post='5073572'] its not a effect card its a normal monster so it just a have a regular discription instead [/quote] [color=black]Please do not make vanilla cards. A vanilla card is a card without an effect in case you didn't know. Some of the people here dislike them, such as myself, becouse it takes no skill or what-so-ever at all to just copy a description of a character from somewhere on the internet or make one up yourself. Try to make [b]AS MUCH EFFECT CARDS AS POSSIBLE[/b] in the future please.[/color] [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300126549' post='5073572'] i dont care if you are lv [b]*5*[/b] or not it doesnt matter really [/quote] [color=black]You should care about suggestions of higher levels becouse they naturally have more experience. However, we are not here do discuss this, but the cards.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CR1ZZBY Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300128503' post='5073648'] 1st my cards so if they are normal monsters or not doesnt matter (i dont like normal monsters) [/quote] [color=black]Sooo your saying that it like doesn't matter if they are normal monsters becouse they are your cards, and you deciede that? Sorry if I didn't quite understand what you wanted to say. Though I agree with this fact about as much as I can, I was just expressing my own opinion with my last reply/comment. I'm not like trying to "push" you to make only effect monsters, I just suggest you to make MORE effect cards becouse I too have much experience of this from what I've learned while I was here in about 2008. - 2009. And trust me, I learned a lot. One of the things that haunted me the most back then is, atleast in my point of view, back then almost EVERYONE would like flame me for making vanillas. So my recent reply was just to try and help you about that matter, not to force you to do so or anything.[/color] [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300128503' post='5073648'] 2nd she was not lv 5 before she mustve just go the new lv just reccently [/quote] [color=black]Doesn't matter. You should still accept critiques, good or bad, from other players with respect. In the end, we all are different and everyone has their own opinion about a certain thing.[/color] [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300128503' post='5073648'] plus the new cards might be effect cards (stil 4 main characters left / 4 memebers of the smith household left) [/quote] [color=black]Glad to hear that. ^^[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CR1ZZBY Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300130429' post='5073720'] 2nd lv and status does not matter what they say matters [/quote] [color=black]Well Sky Fire here didn't say nothing wrong... He/She was just expressing his/her opinion about, in this case, the cards you wanted us to rate, like I was. It's called a critique - a method of disciplined, systematic analysis; a critical review or commentary. (That's the way Google describes it) >.<[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CR1ZZBY Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300135257' post='5073950'] i know ive been thinking for effects and other junk the way you said it sounded like the higher status was more inportant than the acutual critique [/quote] Nah, that's not what I meant. ^^ Everyone has the right for their own opinion, I just meant you should look for suggestions about what's wrong in the comments of more experienced people. After all, critiques are somewhat to help you do better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Flaring Rose Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300128503' post='5073648'] 1st my cards so if they are normal monsters or not doesnt matter (i dont like normal monsters) [b]2nd she was not lv 5 before she mustve just go the new lv just reccently[/b] plus the new cards might be effect cards (stil 4 main characters left / 4 memebers of the smith household left) [/quote] I was Level 4 about 2000 posts ago. But if you don't want to listen to me, then thats your fault. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Kazooie Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='CR1ZZBY' timestamp='1300127410' post='5073601'] [color=black]You should care about suggestions of higher levels becouse they naturally have more experience.However, we are not here do discuss this, but the cards.[/color] [/quote] Not true. Many of them have no logic thought processes, leading them to be worse members, such as Striker for a quick example. About the card, I hav no problem with Normal Monsters, but you need to at least make support for it and work on the grammar a bit. Other then that, there isn't much that can be said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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CR1ZZBY Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='Nastasia' timestamp='1300138363' post='5074108'] Not true. Many of them have no logic thought processes, leading them to be worse members, such as Striker for a quick example. [/quote] [color=black]So your saying that accepting suggestions from more experienced players is wrong? -.-''[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='CR1ZZBY' timestamp='1300141069' post='5074230'] [color=black]So your saying that accepting suggestions from more experienced players is wrong? -.-''[/color] [/quote] No, I'm saying blindly accepting advice from everyone is wrong.~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more (ON TOPIC COMMENT) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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