man_of_power05 Posted March 15, 2011 Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 lol francine is a warrior type. anyways why don't we stay on topic instead of starting a flame war? hm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 im trying to keep people on topic here but people wanna have a flame war they can do it soemwhere else (they can do it in idaho we dont need that horrible state anyways (daniel tosh reffence lol)) the pic seems fine really but if you have better american dad pics let me know ok ? ahem any sugestions and or comments about the cards ??? new card will be added with 1 more ([B]ON TOPIC COMMENT[/B]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 needs moar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [quote name='poinl' timestamp='1300247125' post='5076323'] needs moar [/quote] i k n o w p o i n ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 just shortening it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 felt like a more vertical feel to it poin new card added by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holofoil Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [quote]the pic seems fine really but if you have better american dad pics let me know ok ?[/quote] This picture would turn out a little better on the Stan Smith card. It's an action pose and it's not as zoomed in as the original. http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_xoP2ezvpU7I/TLlwJq1ERII/AAAAAAAAAlM/3sAoRCaTI6A/s1600/stan_smith3+(1).jpg Good photo for Steve. http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ZSu5Am3BKso/THNO5ultGgI/AAAAAAAAA-o/x5vTPiv_Unc/s1600/s04e05.PNG As for Francine, you seem to have found the best photo available that isn't either impossible to crop due to a logo or perverted. It's not too difficult to make these cards. I spent about a day working on 40+ Grunge cards, and I feel I did pretty well on them, even with them being my first and only card set (as of right now). Just think some things over before making a card, try to come up with some nice effects, and more importantly, try to make as little Normal monsters as possible. People usually enjoy seeing Effect monsters rather than Normal monster, since they can do special things. ...and yes, you do need to work on the grammar. If you have any Yu-Gi-Oh cards with you, you can always take lessons from those and see how the card creators wrote the effects and all. Comma placement, what is and isn't capitalized, where to put quotation marks, all that good stuff. Just work a little harder at it, you might do a better job on your next set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [quote name='StitchMayhem' timestamp='1300275810' post='5076711'] This picture would turn out a little better on the Stan Smith card. It's an action pose and it's not as zoomed in as the original. http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_xoP2ezvpU7I/TLlwJq1ERII/AAAAAAAAAlM/3sAoRCaTI6A/s1600/stan_smith3+(1).jpg Good photo for Steve. http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ZSu5Am3BKso/THNO5ultGgI/AAAAAAAAA-o/x5vTPiv_Unc/s1600/s04e05.PNG As for Francine, you seem to have found the best photo available that isn't either impossible to crop due to a logo or perverted. It's not too difficult to make these cards. I spent about a day working on 40+ Grunge cards, and I feel I did pretty well on them, even with them being my first and only card set (as of right now). Just think some things over before making a card, try to come up with some nice effects, and more importantly, try to make as little Normal monsters as possible. People usually enjoy seeing Effect monsters rather than Normal monster, since they can do special things. ...and yes, you do need to work on the grammar. If you have any Yu-Gi-Oh cards with you, you can always take lessons from those and see how the card creators wrote the effects and all. Comma placement, what is and isn't capitalized, where to put quotation marks, all that good stuff. Just work a little harder at it, you might do a better job on your next set. [/quote] well i would use the stan pic but it has a white background they frown upon thta here so i can not use that as for the steve picture i was going to use that pic when i first made thje card but decide to use a different pic (i wanted to use general pics) the ones where they are dessedp up in a differnet outfit that not the regular one they where in each episode might be used for a different version monster (example roger when he tear drop : Roger Smith - Tear Drop Mode - effect monster) plus i know my grammer bites Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
man_of_power05 Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 yea you should work on grammar a little bit. especially steve because i don't entirely understand the last part of it's effect. i mean does your opponent draw two cards at the end of the turn you use the above effect or just while steve is on the field? but other than that, they're not bad. except for a 4 star monster with 2000 ATK, steve has too much DEF. usually if a 4 star monster has that much ATK, their DEF is generally low. But i guess that's why you let the opponent draw 2 cards. to make up for ATK and DEF both being 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holofoil Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [quote]but other than that, they're not bad. except for a 4 star monster with 2000 ATK, steve has too much DEF. usually if a 4 star monster has that much ATK, their DEF is generally low. But i guess that's why you let the opponent draw 2 cards. to make up for ATK and DEF both being 2000. [/quote] Well, that's not [i]always[/i] good. You might end up with too many cards in your hand and have to discard an important card, eventually. That is, unless you have "Infinite Cards" on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 during the end phase your opponent draws 2 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 please bump for comments please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted March 22, 2011 Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 a cia agent who is married to smoking hot blonde who gave birth to his rebellious hippie daughter and a geeky son and he's been keeping a real alien that live on earth since the late 1940's (rosewell, new mexico) in his attic so what can possibllity go wrong ??? A CIA Agent who is married to the smoking hot blonde who gave birth to his rebellious hippie daughter and geeky son. He's been keeping an alien that's lived on Earth since the late 1940's in his attic. What can possibllity go wrong? If you are going to make effectless cards, at least try a LITTLE to make the lore sound appealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 [quote name='Expelsword' timestamp='1300828065' post='5089980'] a cia agent who is married to smoking hot blonde who gave birth to his rebellious hippie daughter and a geeky son and he's been keeping a real alien that live on earth since the late 1940's (rosewell, new mexico) in his attic so what can possibllity go wrong ??? A CIA Agent who is married to the smoking hot blonde who gave birth to his rebellious hippie daughter and geeky son. He's been keeping an alien that's lived on Earth since the late 1940's in his attic. What can possibllity go wrong? If you are going to make effectless cards, at least try a LITTLE to make the lore sound appealing. [/quote] well have you seen the tv show american dad ??? i bet you have not seen the tv show american dad i with stan smith and francine smith i was merely describing the characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holofoil Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 [quote]well have you seen the tv show american dad ??? i bet you have not seen the tv show american dad i with stan smith and francine smith i was merely describing the characters [/quote] I bet he has watched America Dad. He's saying that you should work a little on the grammar. You didn't do a very good job typing down the description of that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 i know i need to work on my ocg any other [B]ON TOPIC[/B] commments ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lol12345 Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Grammar/Spelling could use work. Otherwise, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 thanks i will fix stan's lore and new card will be added with 3 new [B]ON TOPIC[/B] comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 bump for comments please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTouch=UDIE Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 You have a lot of ocg errors But... I think the other two should have effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='UTouch=UDIE' timestamp='1301687604' post='5105253'] You have a lot of ocg errors But... I think the other two should have effects [/quote] you can not just state ocg errors and not try to correct them and the 2 normal monsters will have unquie cards to go with them so there a reason why they are normal monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 ah there ok cards but make sure there spelled right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='yugioh_master99' timestamp='1301696758' post='5105561'] ah there ok cards but make sure there spelled right [/quote] okay thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 please bump for comments please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 please bump for comments please new on topic and i will post new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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