UnoriginalName Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 My first card. If anyone has any suggestions, please let me hear them, as I am very new. Let me know about the wording and what you think... thanks! [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/88/377412.jpg[/img] Lore (finally): Once per turn, you can discard 1 Level 4 or lower monster in your hand to the Graveyard, half that monsters original ATK and is treated as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points. During each of your turns, you must activate this effect or this card is destroyed and take 500 damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 please add lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Dark one~ Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 Once per turn you can discard one level 4 or lower monster in your hand to the Graveyard, Half that monsters original ATK is treated as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points. You must activate this effect or this card is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnoriginalName Posted March 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1299730484' post='5063848'] please add lore [/quote] Sorry, what is lore? hehe, Im such a loser Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 needs a small ocg fix but its a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 Not bad, I won't say anything about the OCG because I myself don't use very good card grammar, the effect is unique, the effect kinda reminds of my Armored Avenger Archetype concept where you can just send a monster from your hand to the graveyard to do some major tremors on your Opponent's Life Points. Nice! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 [quote]Sorry, what is lore? hehe, Im such a loser [/quote] here's the lore/effect of your cards [quote]Once per turn you can discard one level 4 or lower monster in your hand to the Graveyard, Half that monsters original ATK is treated as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points. You must activate this effect or this card is destroyed.[/quote] btw this the OCG Fix IMO: Once per turn, you can discard 1 Level 4 or lower monster in your hand to the Graveyard, half that monsters original ATK and is treated as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points. During each of your turns, you must activate this effect or this card is destroyed and take 500 damage. The effect is unique i think, you can boots Dark World Decks with this, good for a new. hoping more from you , A for this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnoriginalName Posted March 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 Lore is up, I am currently working on a set, so no new cards for a while (except for random ideas I come up with). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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