sean01 Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Hey I am new at this and these are my first cards, tell me what you think of them.[attachment=21489][attachment=21490][attachment=21491][attachment=21492] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 OK before I say anything understand this. OCG = Official Card Grammar. Ahem...the OCG in these isn't the best, your grammar is off, your pics are so-so and the originality stinks. Sorry but I have to be blunt. But I'll give 2/10 I've seen worse from new guys...much worse *coughrentacough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Well, since you're new, I'll be nice. You need to write in proper OCG (Official Card Grammar). Which means, use ATK/DEF instead of Attack/Defense, use Spellcaster-type instead of Spellcaster, and so on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Welcome to the forum ^_^ Here in this section we, the members, tend to judge quite harshly, but we judge fairly, and on some card aspects Grammar, OCG, spelling, picture quality, uniqueness ^_^ Anyway, the cards ^_^ There are Grammar and OCG errors in your cards but dont worry ^_^ Every or most new members start out like it, even i did, the more you stay on this forum the more you will learn to become better and to improve your errors ^_^ Good effort on these cards and welcome ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Hey welcome to the Forums! As Osirus said above me, we the judges are harsh. Ill give you my honest opinion. OVERPOWERED! The last form of the dm girl has an effect stronger than mage power! and Mage Power is Limited card! OCG is missing a few things. Nice try though, but we the judges don't take well to card remakes. For your level, try making pop culture cards. they are way easier and more fun! NIce try though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 good effort beginner:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 hello!welcome to the fourms wow nice though but OVERPOWERED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol umm yea i like spellcasters but wow that is just to much!!!!!!! +900 omg lol but i love the pic on call forth lol. u need to work on ur ocg on all but yea good effort for being new !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 welcome and good cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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