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Bleach: Enemies in the Shadows [Chapter 4 Added]

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[spoiler=Chapter 1: Blood Well Spent]As he saw a slight movement in the shadows, the man drew his blade and was ready. He coughed up blood and now had his eyes wide open as he saw a sword go right through his gut. "Kgh! Who the hell are you?" he asked "No one important heheheh." the man in the shadows stated as he lfted his sword while it was still in the man's gut. "GWAAAAAAAAAAAH!" the unnamed Soul Reaper screamed as the mystery man sliced him in two.

"Captain! Captain!" a lieutenant yelled at the door of a Captain's room on his knees "5th Seat Yushi Futotcho has just been found dead! His killer must not have gotten far due to us having found his body moments after the scream! We have sent out the 6th through 11th seats! We beg of you to join them!" the lieutenent begged. "Very well." the Captain responded as he opened the door and walked out. "I will require your assistance. Tell me, Tsurara, how did his body look?" the Captain asked. "Horrible Captain Munmum! It was cut straight in two!" the lieutenent discribed. "This is no ordinary enemy. He has no mercy." Captain Munmum stated. His last name fitted him well. It meant Moon. Just as his Zanpakuto translated into Crescent Moon Blade. "We're off." he stated "Yessir!" Tsurara responded.

"GWAH!" a Soul Reaper screamed as he fell. "Who is this guy?" an unnamed Soul Reaper asked. "He IS a Soul Reaper, right?" he continued "Heheheh, yes, but I'm not part of the 13 Court Guard Squads." he stated as the man killed him with a single stab, just as he did to the rest.

"Found you." a voice stated as the Captain appeared. The first full view of him. The Captain had med-length brown hair and blue eyes. He looked at the man who seemed like he was the complete color of the shadow. "Ah, Captain of Squad 7, Akarui Munmum." the man stated as his head changed from shadow-black, to a real face. Pitch-Black hair and pitch-black eyes to boot. "Yami Hakai. Former leutenent of Squad 8." Captain Munmum stated "Tsurara. Stand back." Captain Munmum stated. "But Captain-" "Just do it!" the Captain interrupted "Very well." he responded as he flash-stepped to a new location, but could still see them.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 2: Menmum's Death?!?!?!?!?!?!?!]
"I've been looking forward to this day." Yami stated as the shadows covering the rest of his body were dispelled, revealing average Soul Reaper clothing. "I will kill you for that day." he continued "That day. When I challenged you for the title of Captain!" he declared "You spared my life that day. I lost my honor and pride. And for that, I'll kill you!" he declared as he showed his blade "Disappear! Shadouburēdo!" he declared as the blade of his Zanpakuto was released into it's Shikai form and disappeared into the shadows. Captain Menmum drew his Zanpakuto and pointed it at Yami. A shadow seemed to launch itself at Captain Menmum in the shape of a blade "No." Captain Menmum stated as his Spiritual Pressure increased to a rate to when the Shadow couldn't even pierce him. He decided put back his Zanpakuto and pointed his finger at Yami "Hado#4: Byakurai." he stated as a concentrated, powerful ray of lightning shot from his finger towards Yami.

Tsurara was overwhelmed by his Captain's Spiritual Pressure "Ugh." he stated as he fell to the ground. The Spiritual Pressure being even too much for a lieutenant.

"Captain Menmum's Spiritual Pressure, it's greater than anything I've ever imagined." another Captain stated while he was walking down the hall. "Yeah." another Captain near him stated.

"Over here." Yami stated behind Captain Menmum "!!!" "You can't kill me with a simple Kido." he stated "Probably not." Captain Menmum agreed as he drew his Zanpakuto "Reveal yourself. Kuresentomūnburēdo." Captain Menmum stated as his Zanpakuto grew to the size of his body and became shaped like a Crescent Moon. "!!! Last time, you didn't even release your Zanpakuto. I never even thought you knew it's name." Yami stated with a slight chuckle "Finally, I can defeat you while you're at your full power!" Yami laughed maniachally "Bankai!" Yami declared. Thousands of swords emerged from the shadows on the wall, and began to emerge from the shadows of the nighttime sky. "Shadouburēdotorunēdo!" Yami declared "Shadow Blade Tornado?" Captain Menmum asked. "Yes. Now die." Yami responded as the blades began to spin and wind began to pick up. Soon a tornado was created that seemed to be made of shadows. After minutes of it, the Tornado dispelled itself and Yami's sword was once again a Katana.

"Captain Menmum?" Tsurara stated as he got back up "He can't be dead." he continued. "Heh, he's not dead." a voice stated from behind Tsurara "Wha? Oh! Captain Ken!" Tsurara stated as she saw the Squad 10 Captain.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 3: Enter - Ichigo Kurosaki's Return]"I'm not dead." Captain Menmum's voice stated as he walked out of the shadows, he had many cuts and blood dripping from them but they were not so deep. "H-how did you survive?!" Yami asked, still turned away from them. "It's basic. I used my Spiritual Pressure to protect me. But I could not fully protect myself. Here. You will die." Captain Menmum stated "Bankai."

Tsurara sighed as he felt hs Captain's Spiritual Pressure again. "See?" Captain Ken asked. "Yes." Tsurara replied "Heh, but he overdid it." Captain Ken continued as he watched the Bankai rip Yami in two. "Hm, we could have used him for interrogation. Maybe next time." Captain Ken stated as he walked away.

Captain Menmum walked away as he put away his sealed Zanpakuto, he had lost quite a bit of blood from all those cuts, they weren't deep, but they were long. "Maybe I shouldn't have overdone it." he stated as he continued to walk back to his quaters.

[center][b]Meanwhile, in the World of the Living[/b][/center]

"Uuuuagh!" a familiar voice yelled as the sword Zangetsu sliced a Hollow in two. "One down..." Ichigo stated "About 500 to go." Uryu stated behind him. "Let's go, Zangetsu." Ichigo stated as he gripped his sword "Getsuga Tensho!" he yelled as he released the signature move of Zangetsu, collecting Spiritual Pressure at the tip of the blade and unleashed it at the end of the swing of it, destroying many Hollows. "Why the hell are there so many Hollows?" he asked, breathing heavily.

At a distance, a shadow seemed to be watching the battle "Ichigo Kurosaki. I have no idea how you regained your Soul Reaper Powers, but you are an obstacle which must be eliminated." the shadow stated as the shadow was revealed to be a human. He crushed what seemed to be a Quincy Bait and more Hollows began to appear around Ichigo and Uryu "Heheheh."

"The hell?!" Ichigo exclaimed as more Hollows appeared "There's at least three times as many then before!" Uryu exclaimed. "Well then." Ichigo stated as he entered the stance for his Bankai "Ichigo-" "Better stand back Uryu." Ichigo interupted "Bankai." he stated as black waves of Spiritual Energy with a red Aura surrounded Ichigo in a sphere and then errupted in a volcano-fashion. Once it was dispelled Ichigo now had a black glove over his right hand where he held his black sword, his outfit was now jacket-like without a sleeve on the right arm which had a chain around it from the end of the hilt of the sword "Tensa Zangetsu."[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 4: Introducing - The Uncatagorized!]Ichigo stood in a heavily damaged battlefield. "Don't mess with me Hollows." Ichigo stated breathing heavily. From a distance Kisuke was watching from a distance "He's just recovered his abilities a few months ago. And yet he's gotten stronger." he stated as Ichigo swung his Bankai blade over his shoulder "But once again he's depending on his Bankai. Won't be long until it starts failing him again." Kisuke continued.

The man hidden in the shadows watched the short-lived battle between him and the Hollows "Now that I know his strengths and weaknesses, he will be easy to defeat." the man stated with a smile as he melted into the shadows and disappeared.

"Ichigo, you've gotten stronger already." Kisuke stated as he walked up to him and Uryu "But I'm afraid, that you're about to get a whole lot weaker." Kisuke continued "I think you should come with me to my shop. That is, if you don't want to lower your chances of losing a fight." Kisuke stated as he began to walk off and just disappeared in an fog that was unnoticed during the battle. "He's right, Ichigo." Uryu stated. "I know." Ichigo responded as he walked in the same direction.

[center][b]Meanwhile, in Hueco Mundo[/b][/center]

In the area where Grand Fisher once resided, many shadows in the shapes of people appared on the poles around. "Yami has beem defeated." one stated. "He was careless and could not think rationally. Good riddance!" another snapped, that one caused a chain reaction which caused the whole group to begin bickering. "QUIET!" the one in the center snapped and those who were bickering stopped "We only have one goal. To rule over both the World of the Living and the Soul Society!" he continued "So stop this useless bickering!" he yelled "We are those who have been combined with Hollows! The uncatagorized! Our kind has resided in Hueco Mundo ever since Hollows and Humans ever interracted! Gifted with the abilities of Hollows and the ability to combine ourselves with shadows!" The man continued "We are of higher capabilities than the 13 Court Guard Squads! We must not fight amongst ourselves!" he yelled as he pointed his finger at a unused pole and fired off a black Cero which completely annihalated the part which was caught within the blast. "Do you not see our power?!" he yelled.

[center][b]Back in the World of the Living[/b][/center]

Ichigo was standing in front of Urahara's Shop. Kisuke opened the door "This training will be nothing like any other training before Ichigo, are you ready?" Kisuke asked "Yup." Ichigo responded as he walked in. Kisuke opened the floor tile to his underground training area "Hop in." he stated. Ichigo did just that and jumped in. He hadn't been down there in a while, and was actually satisfied to see it. Urahara was right behind him. "Alright Ichigo. Let's go." Kisuke stated as he drew his Zanpakuto from his cane "Awaken. Benihime." he stated as his Zanpakuto was released into its Shikai form "Shall we begin?" he added as he pointed his Zanpakuto at Ichigo. "Let's do this." Ichigo stated as he grabbed Zangetsu's hilt and its cloth was removed from it "Let's go. Zangetsu!" he stated as he pointed Zangetsu at Kisuke and Benihime. Kisuke smiled at this and they both leaped at each other and clashed blades. Their Spiritual Pressure collided the same way as they kept on bouncing off of each other and collided over and over again. "Getsuga Tensho!" "Scream!" they deaclared simultaneously as their attacks collided, which they both grinned at. "I don't plan on going easy on you Urahara." Ichigo stated "Me neither Ichigo." Kisuke responded as they clashed swords once again.

Meanwhile, Uryu, Chad and Orihime were fighting Hollows which were appearing all over Karakura "Tsubaki!" Orihime yelled "Koten Zanshun! I reject!" she yelled again and managed to split a whole line of Hollows, just as Chad and Uryu did with one strike with more Hollows as well. "Why the hell are there so many Hollows?" Uryu asked as he fired more arrows. "When we defeat one, ten others appear." Chad stated as he wiped out more Hollows with a single strike.[/spoiler]
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[quote name='Thatnoobkorean' timestamp='1300170149' post='5074875']
hooray much more familira characters,
being a fell writer still bugs me about the organization of it, the wording got better but delivery become better if you use more spaces
especially in quotations
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This is exactly how me and Techi did our Naruto fanfic *shot*

Think I'm doing good on their personalities?
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