ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Please feel free to comment, this is just one card from a set I'm working on. looking for ways to improve. thanks for commenting. [img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/1513/219511.jpg[/img] Lore:Special Summon one "Dragon" type fusion monster from your Extra deck by sending the appropriate cards from your field, deck, or Extra deck to the graveyard. (This summon is treated as a fusion summon). When that monster is successfully summoned, take damage equal to half the ATK of the summoned monster. [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1513/219511.jpg[/img] Lore:This card can only be special summoned by a fusion summon with the above fusion material monsters. Once per turn you can negate the activation of a spell, trap, or effect monsters effect and destroy that card. If this card attacks one of your opponents defense position monsters, destroy that card immediately without applying damage calculation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 OCG fix time! Send, from your hand, Extra Deck or your side of the field to the Graveyard, fusion material monsters listed on a Dragon-Type Fusion Monster card and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon). Then take damage equal to half of the Special Summoned monster's ATK. An alternative of Dragon's Mirror - I like it, since I love Cyberdarks. Targeting monsters from the Extra Deck is also great, and now summoning Dragon Master Knight is that much easier, and you can just use KotS and this. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1300120094' post='5073378'] OCG fix time! Send, from your hand, Extra Deck or your side of the field to the Graveyard, fusion material monsters listed on a Dragon-Type Fusion Monster card and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon). Then take damage equal to half of the Special Summoned monster's ATK. An alternative of Dragon's Mirror - I like it, since I love Cyberdarks. Targeting monsters from the Extra Deck is also great, and now summoning Dragon Master Knight is that much easier, and you can just use KotS and this. 8/10 [/quote] Thanks for the fix, I'll change it as soon as possible. Also, I wasn't even thinking of Cyberdarks when I made this, but It is a good card for them, I was actually working on a fusion of Stardust and Red Dragon Archfiend. I'll post an unfinished version of that one to get help with it's lore as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 V good card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6983/219511g.jpg[/img] This is my edited version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Deck? better than Dragon Mirror? id say both cards OPed. but nice try . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 This is a better version of future fusion for dragons. You have even greater freedom with the cards you can dump in the Graveyard and you don't have to wait 2 turns. Future fusion is limited to 1 for a reason. Losing 2500 Life Points isn't really much of a cost for its effect. The cards even better than Cyberstein, which is banned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 bad pics the spell, isnt it just mirror and the fusion is uncreative 5/10 average Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1300122752' post='5073462'] Deck? better than Dragon Mirror? id say both cards OPed. but nice try . [/quote] I can see how my Spell is a bit OPed, so can you suggest any fixes to help me make it better. Also, I don't think my Dragon is really that OPed, I mean it can only use it's effect once per turn, so it's not really that much better than Stardust, granted it doesn't leave the field which may make it better but this may also hinderer him because Stardust is safe for the rest of the turn in the graveyard. Also the monster destruction effect is almost weaker than that of Red Dragon, who destroys all of your opponents DEF position monsters. [quote name='yamibakura51' timestamp='1300123465' post='5073482'] bad pics the spell, isnt it just mirror and the fusion is uncreative 5/10 average [/quote] I wasn't going for creative with the Fusion, I was just trying to make a fusion with similar effects of both dragons. And I know the pic isn't that good for my Dragon but I said it wasn't finished. And my spell is better than mirror Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 maybe pay half of your Life Points? i mean with this you can easily summon your Fusion Monster/Stardust Red Dragon youve made i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 you merely copy dragon mirrior (but do like the added extra deck effect) and copy and combine the effects of the 2 sychros monster that are listed for the fusion materials of this fusion monster pic are okay but a really unoriginal idea (-023.072/+100.000) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
インフェルニティ・ミラージュ Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 The Ultimate Dragonic Fusion is nice, but chances are it would be Limited/Banned rather quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300128030' post='5073635'] you merely copy dragon mirrior (but do like the added extra deck effect) and copy and combine the effects of the 2 sychros monster that are listed for the fusion materials of this fusion monster pic are okay but a really unoriginal idea (-023.072/+100.000) [/quote] While I admit that it is similar to dragon's mirror, it also has it's differences. Mirror only does from field and graveyard and removes them from play. My card doesn't remove from play and sends the cards from the hand, field, and Extra deck (but not the deck) to the graveyard. So it's NOT a copy of dragon mirror and the effects of my fusion are similar but not the same, they are modified. I just figured that a fusion of the two monsters should have a similar yet combined effect of both.[quote name='Infernity Mirage' timestamp='1300130985' post='5073744'] The Ultimate Dragonic Fusion is nice, but chances are it would be Limited/Banned rather quickly. [/quote] Maybe limited, but I don't see it on the Ban list, not when you can still use three Dragon's Mirror.[quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1300127511' post='5073603'] maybe pay half of your Life Points? i mean with this you can easily summon your Fusion Monster/Stardust Red Dragon youve made i mean [/quote] I don't know about half, I'll just make it the full ATK of the summoned monster, similar to power bond.[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1513/219511.jpg[/img] my edited version. now what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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