My 1st card

[Skakyrou]

Im posting my 1st card to what you guys think

[img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/6558/346600.jpg[/img]

Description: 1 Synchro + 2 or light non-Tuner
This card can only be destroyed by spell and trap cards. When this card is sent to the graveyard you can pay 1000 life points to activate one of these effects
- destroy all face down monster cards on your opponents side of the field.
- select 2 cards from your opponents graveyard and remove them from play
- increase the attack of all the light-type monsters by 500 including this card until the end of your battle phase

[beefman]

OCG fix:

Description: 1 Synchro [b]Monster[/b] + 2 or [b]more[/b] light non-Tuner [b]monsters[/b]
This card can only be destroyed by [b]S[/b]pell and [b]T[/b]rap cards. When this card is sent to the [b]G[/b]raveyard[b],[/b] you can pay 1000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints to activate one of the[s]se[/s] [b]following[/b] effects[b]:[/b]
- [b]D[/b]estroy all face[b]-[/b]down monster[b]s[/b] [s]cards[/s] on your opponent[b]'[/b]s [s]side of the[/s] field.
- [b]S[/b]elect 2 cards [s]from[/s] [b]in[/b] your opponent[b]'[/b]s [b]G[/b]raveyard and remove them from play[b].[/b]
- [b]I[/b]ncrease the [s]attack[/s] [b]ATK[/b] of all the [b]LIGHT[/b] [s]-type[/s] monsters by 500 [s]including this card[/s] until the end of your [b]next[/b] [b]B[/b]attle [b]P[/b]hase[b].[/b]

Yeah, there are a ton of mistakes. Small mistakes. It seems balanced and creative, but the pic is very overused.

7/10

[ltorres666]

[color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]This card seems okay, but it should say:[/font][/color]
[font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][color="#1C2837"] 1 [/color][b][color="#1C2837"]Tuner [/color][color="#FF0000"](Unless you want it to be a Synchro and a tuner, in that case it should say 1 Synchro Tuner Monster) [/color][/b][color="#1C2837"] + 2 or [/color][b]more[/b][color="#1C2837"] light non-Tuner [/color][b]monsters[/b]
[color="#1C2837"]This card can[/color][b]not be destroyed by battle[/b][color="#1C2837"]. When this card is sent to the [/color][b]G[/b][color="#1C2837"]raveyard[/color][b],[/b][color="#1C2837"] you can pay 1000 [/color][b]L[/b][color="#1C2837"]ife [/color][b]P[/b][color="#1C2837"]oints to activate one of the [/color][b]following[/b][color="#1C2837"] effects[/color][b]:[/b]
[color="#1C2837"]- [/color][b]D[/b][color="#1C2837"]estroy all face[/color][b]-[/b][color="#1C2837"]down monster[/color][b]s[/b][color="#1C2837"] [/color]cards[color="#1C2837"] on your opponent[/color][b]'[/b][color="#1C2837"]s side of the field.[/color]
[color="#1C2837"]- [/color][b]S[/b][color="#1C2837"]elect 2 cards [/color]from[color="#1C2837"] [/color][b]in[/b][color="#1C2837"] your opponent[/color][b]'[/b][color="#1C2837"]s [/color][b]G[/b][color="#1C2837"]raveyard and remove them from play[/color][b].[/b]
[color="#1C2837"]- [/color][b]I[/b][color="#1C2837"]ncrease the [/color]attack[color="#1C2837"] [/color][b]ATK[/b][color="#1C2837"] of all [/color][s]the[/s][color="#1C2837"] [/color][b]LIGHT[/b][color="#1C2837"] [/color]-type[color="#1C2837"] monsters [/color][b]on your side of the field[/b][color="#1C2837"] by 500 [/color]including this card[color="#1C2837"] until the end of your [/color][b]next[/b][color="#1C2837"] [/color][b]B[/b][color="#1C2837"]attle [/color][b]P[/b][color="#1C2837"]hase[/color][b].[/b][/font]
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[font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]Now for improvements, I think you should remove 2 random cards from your opponents hand it it's gonna cost you 1000 LPs, also you should increase the ATK of all of your light monsters by 600. Other than that, not a bad first try.[/color][/font]