Akuna Zeckzen Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 [img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7850/381713.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/7850/381713.jpg[/img]also some more [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7850/381713.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7742/381713j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7122/381713p.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 The normal monsters are REALLY overpowered, and Baby Hitler is just a joke card. Most of your grammatical errors are English errors, so you need to fix that up too. You know, putting capital letters at the beginning of sentences and such. Cradle of Time's increase is too big as well. These are some of many errors. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Zeckzen Posted March 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 ill fix them up thenheres some more regardless [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/7850/381713.jpg[/img] [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6843/381713r.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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