Heavenly Reached

[AgentBlaze117]

These cards took me awhile to finish, and I'm still looking for Pics so I can make more. Anyway, here are the cards I got so far.

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Lore:This monsters has been learning the secrets of the Spirits of the Heavens. Even though she has learned a great amount, she is still not ready.

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Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card is Equiped with an Equip Spell card, it cannot be Targeted. If this card is Equiped with a Trap card, this card is destroyed at the End Phase.

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Lore:This card cannot be Flip Summoned except by a card effect, or fliped Face-up by an attack. When this card is Normal Summoned, add 1 "Sprit of the Heavens" monster from your deck to your hand.

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Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 "Spirit of the Heavens" monster from the field, and removing from play 1 Fairy-type monster from your hand or field. This card cannot be removed from play.

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Lore:This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material monster, except for the Synchro Summoning of a "Spirit of the Heavens" monster.

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Lore:1 "Spirit of the Heavens" Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.
When this card is Synchro Summoned, return 1 monster on the Field to the owners hand.

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Lore:Activate only when a "Sprit of the Heavens" monster is targeted for an Attack target. It is now the End Phase of this turn. After this cards activation, return this card to its origional position.

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You can overlap this card with a second Field Spell. Fairy-type monsters cannot be destroyed by battle.

[img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/802/353561.jpg[/img]
Lore:You can overlap this card with a second Field Spell. Fairy-type monsters cannot be destroyed by Spell card effects.

[img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/2980/353561d.jpg[/img]
Lore:You can overlap this with a second Field Spell card. Fairy-type monsters cannot be destroyed by Trap card effects.



I can change some stuff if you want, OK?

[Mecha Love]

Some pics are a bit mergh.
The OCG needs improving (can't im on phone)
Try not to do Normal Cards, they aren't very inventive.

However I do rather like the overlapping heaven's. Make sure they can't overlap another Heaven card tho.

[Zeromaxx]

I'll do this quick. Dangerous OCG errors, overpowered Spell Cards(Heaven#1,2 and 3), unsuported Archetype, most of the cards would be useless because of their selfishness(the don't support other cards or assist in the strategy).

Overall: 5/10

Improve:
-Pictures
-OCG
-Better archetype support/general support
-Balance

[Mecha Love]

^agreed.

[AgentBlaze117]

[quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1300563744' post='5083372']
Some pics are a bit mergh.
The OCG needs improving (can't im on phone)
Try not to do Normal Cards, they aren't very inventive.

However I do rather like the overlapping heaven's. Make sure they can't overlap another Heaven card tho.
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[quote name='Maxim58' timestamp='1300564241' post='5083389']
I'll do this quick. Dangerous OCG errors, overpowered Spell Cards(Heaven#1,2 and 3), unsuported Archetype, most of the cards would be useless because of their selfishness(the don't support other cards or assist in the strategy).

Overall: 5/10

Improve:
-Pictures
-OCG
-Better archetype support/general support
-Balance
[/quote]


[quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1300564471' post='5083398']
^agreed.
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Remember, I am still making this Archetype. So, later, I will post the rest.