Dimensional Fiend

[jbc1994363]

Hey haven't made a card in a long time. So please tell me if there's anything ithing i can do to improve it or if it's just plain OP'd thanks

[IMG]http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z223/jbc1994363/DimensionalFiend.png[/IMG]

EFFECT

This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can not be Special summoned except by removing from play 1-5 monster cards from your graveyard. The attack and defense of this card is X1000 for each card removed from play to summon this card. This card can not be destroyed by a monster effect. When this card destroy's a monster in a result of battle put 1 counter on this card (Max 5). When this card has 5 counters on it you can remove all cards from play on your opponents side of the field. Once this effect is used remove this card from play. This card can not be returned to play under any condition after this effect is used.

[Inexplicable Madness]

~OCG CORRECTIONS

This card [b]cannot[/b] be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can [b]only[/b] be Special [b]S[/b]ummoned [s]except[/s] by removing from play monster cards from your [b]G[/b]raveyard. The [b]ATK and DEF[/b] of this card is [b]increased 500[/b] for each card removed from play to summon this card. This card [b]cannot[/b] be destroyed by a monster effect. When this card destroy's a monster [b]by[/b] battle [b]place[/b] 1 counter on this card [s](Max 5)[/s]. When this card has 5 counters [s]on it[/s] you [b]may[/b] remove all cards from play [b]in your opponent's control[/b]. Once this effect is used remove this card from play. [s]This card can not be returned to play under any condition after this effect is used. [/s]

~RATINGS

-title -- 10/10
-picture -- 10/10
-effect -- 10/10
-balance -- 9/10
-originality -- 9/10
-OCG -- 6/10

~OVERALL RATING

9/10 -- just fix the ocg

[jbc1994363]

Alright thanks i fixed it

[IMG]http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z223/jbc1994363/DimensionalFiend-1.png[/IMG]

EFFECT
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play monster cards from your Graveyard. The ATK and DEF of this card is increased 800 for each card removed from play to summon this card. This card cannot be destroyed by a monster effect. When this card destroy's a monster by battle place 1 counter on this card. When this card has 5 counters you may remove all cards from play in your opponent's control. Once this effect is used remove this card from play.

I made the card atk and def increase by 800 instead of 500 though seemed a bit up to me

[DARKPLANT RISING]

Give it a Sphinx clause like "This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned" and it's completely right. Also maybe "You can control only 1 "Dimensional Field" at the same time" or something. Right now it's abusable.

[jbc1994363]

Fixed again also updated the first post

[IMG]http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z223/jbc1994363/DimensionalFiend-2.png[/IMG]

EFFECT

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card

can only be Special Summoned by removing from play

monster cards from your Graveyard. The ATK and DEF of

this card is increased 800 for each card removed from play

to summon this card. This card cannot attack during the

same turn it was summoned. This card cannot be destroyed

by a monster effect. When this card destroy's a monster by

battle place 1 counter on this card. When this card has 5

counters you may remove all cards from play in your

opponent's control. Once this effect is used remove this

card from play.

Never mind on the first post thing can't edit it cause the forums are going weird to me