Nel Cards

[Bulldozer1231]

[size="4"]I liked Nel through out the entire Los Noches invasion. I couldn't figure out what effects to give her that I could take from the show, so I came up with my own. Tell me what you think.

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[size="4"] You can tribute this face-up card to [/size] [size="4"][url="topic/244200-nel-cards/#"]Special[/url][/size][size="4"] Summon 1 "Neliel Tu Oderschvank". This card can not be destroyed by battle(damage calculation is still applied).[/size]

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[size="4"] If your opponent controls a monster after this card has declared an attack, this card can attack your opponent directly.[/size]

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[size="4"] This card can not be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing "Neliel Tu Oderschvank" on your side of the field. This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. If you do, your opponent takes no battle damage.[/size]
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[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Nel's effect needs to specify where you bring the next form out from. Also, put some kind of condition (like LV monsters have) on it or it could be considered OP'd.

Oderschvank is what makes the first one OP'd. Instant 2800 beatstick that could easily deal more than 2800 damage (if the monster was in ATK position). Also, find a different pic. I'm predicting massive amounts of ero hate. Unless J-Max posts here

The Released will be perfectly balanced if you give Nel the condition I said earlier.

And for my final comment:

[spoiler=Nel FTW!!!]
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