Valkyrus Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Here are my newest cards. All pictures have been edited by me. I'm in the middle of making a Spellcaster deck and here are my newest additions~ [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/gfdrftghj.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [i]You can send this face-up monster on your side of the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 level 8 or lower Spellcaster-type monster from your deck. Monsters on your side of the field cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated. Every time you attack with a monster Special summoned through this card's effect your opponent draws 1 card.[/i] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/jhgdeerfty.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [i]Lower this monster's level by 1 to negate 1 attack. You can discard 1 card to increase this monster's level by 1.[/i] + 2 random cards. [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/bvcvb.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [i]1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. Whenever this monster's chosen as an attack target you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in attack position and change the attack target to the Special Summoned monster.At the End Phase of a turn this effect is used the Special Summoned monster(s) is(are) removed from play. Any battle damage received by this card's effect is dealt to your opponent.[/i] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/565113.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [i]When this monster is Normal, Flip or Special Summoned successfully you can roll a six-sided die.Draw cards equal to the number you get. Pay 500 Life Points for every card you wish to keep in your hand. Discard the remaining cards you drew using this monster's effect to your Graveyard.[/i] c & c please~ I want to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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:bcoe Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 could you post the lore plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 [quote name=':bcoe' timestamp='1301008262' post='5094427'] could you post the lore plz. [/quote] okay, added lores ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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kemren_18 Posted March 25, 2011 Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 Wow your cards are very nice..Could be linked to the set of Yame Yugis set of cards..Amazing pics..10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted March 25, 2011 Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 "Lore: You can send this face-up monster on your side of the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 level 8 or lower Spellcaster-type monster from your deck. Monsters on your side of the field cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated. Every time you attack with a monster Special summoned through this card's effect your opponent draws 1 card." I'd say this card is broken. Level 8 is way too high to be searched so easily. You wouldn't need to attack with all the effects that revolve around just having control of a Dark Magician or spell counter effects etc. Its a Lonefire for Spellcasters. The 1500 ATK and the neg draw effect are nice balancers but I think they are enough, its too easy to get around for such a powerful effect. "Lore: Lower this monster's level by 1 to negate 1 attack. You can discard 1 card to increase this monster's level by 1." I like this cards effect, good for synchro and stall, which go well together. 3 is a good level, thats 2 free negates, there are cards out there like Shield Wing that already do this but with the level mechanic I could see this being used. "Lore: 1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. Whenever this monster's chosen as an attack target you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in attack position and change the attack target to the Special Summoned monster.At the End Phase of a turn this effect is used the Special Summoned monster(s) is(are) removed from play. Any battle damage received by this card's effect is dealt to your opponent." You need to limit this guys effect in some way. Being able to select any level or type monster in your Graveyard as many times as you want per battle phase is too much. Not only that, but for your opponent to get rid of the cards they have to take all battle damage. His effect is better than not being destroyed by battle. Limit it to maybe just Spellcasters or Dark monsters and once per turn. "Lore: When this monster is Normal, Flip or Special Summoned successfully you can roll a six-sided die.Draw cards equal to the number you get. Pay 500 Life Points for every card you wish to keep in your hand. Discard the remaining cards you drew using this monster's effect to your Graveyard." This guy is really broken. You could get through your whole deck in a few turns with cards like Limit Reverse, 1 for 1, and having 200 DEF makes him even more searchable. I'd say have it as Pay 500 Life Points for each card drawn by the effect and Pay 1000 Life Points to keep a card in your hand. If he were like that, it would be a really good card I think, much less abusable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 [quote name=':bcoe' timestamp='1301066976' post='5095579'] "Lore: You can send this face-up monster on your side of the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 level 8 or lower Spellcaster-type monster from your deck. Monsters on your side of the field cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated. Every time you attack with a monster Special summoned through this card's effect your opponent draws 1 card." I'd say this card is broken. Level 8 is way too high to be searched so easily. You wouldn't need to attack with all the effects that revolve around just having control of a Dark Magician or spell counter effects etc. Its a Lonefire for Spellcasters. The 1500 ATK and the neg draw effect are nice balancers but I think they are enough, its too easy to get around for such a powerful effect. "Lore: Lower this monster's level by 1 to negate 1 attack. You can discard 1 card to increase this monster's level by 1." I like this cards effect, good for synchro and stall, which go well together. 3 is a good level, thats 2 free negates, there are cards out there like Shield Wing that already do this but with the level mechanic I could see this being used. "Lore: 1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. Whenever this monster's chosen as an attack target you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in attack position and change the attack target to the Special Summoned monster.At the End Phase of a turn this effect is used the Special Summoned monster(s) is(are) removed from play. Any battle damage received by this card's effect is dealt to your opponent." You need to limit this guys effect in some way. Being able to select any level or type monster in your Graveyard as many times as you want per battle phase is too much. Not only that, but for your opponent to get rid of the cards they have to take all battle damage. His effect is better than not being destroyed by battle. Limit it to maybe just Spellcasters or Dark monsters and once per turn. "Lore: When this monster is Normal, Flip or Special Summoned successfully you can roll a six-sided die.Draw cards equal to the number you get. Pay 500 Life Points for every card you wish to keep in your hand. Discard the remaining cards you drew using this monster's effect to your Graveyard." This guy is really broken. You could get through your whole deck in a few turns with cards like Limit Reverse, 1 for 1, and having 200 DEF makes him even more searchable. I'd say have it as Pay 500 Life Points for each card drawn by the effect and Pay 1000 Life Points to keep a card in your hand. If he were like that, it would be a really good card I think, much less abusable. [/quote] Thanks a lot for the review! ^^ Hmm, well I knew Special Summoning a level 8 would be quite OP'd but I thought I made it more balanced...since I want to associate this card with the summoning of a specific higher level monster I wanted to keep that effect. I'll think of something to make it better! I'm glad you like Level Gardna ^^ and I think I'll take your advice on the Synchro about only Dark monsters! ^^ oh and for Lucky Fiend I think you're right also, I'll make sure to fix it! ^^ Thanks again for the review ^^ btw, what about the images? I mostly worked on editing them --- love/hate more c & c is always welcome ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted March 25, 2011 Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1301077912' post='5095784'] Thanks a lot for the review! ^^ Hmm, well I knew Special Summoning a level 8 would be quite OP'd but I thought I made it more balanced...since I want to associate this card with the summoning of a specific higher level monster I wanted to keep that effect. I'll think of something to make it better! I'm glad you like Level Gardna ^^ and I think I'll take your advice on the Synchro about only Dark monsters! ^^ oh and for Lucky Fiend I think you're right also, I'll make sure to fix it! ^^ Thanks again for the review ^^ btw, what about the images? I mostly worked on editing them --- love/hate more c & c is always welcome ^^ [/quote] Thery're really good, what editor did you use, GIMP? I really like Lucky Fiend and Level Gardna, and they all apply really well to the effects. Did you have to do much editing for them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted March 25, 2011 Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 first 2 cards are great the synchro monster you might want to exclude the battle damage as its powerful already without it the last card is extremely OP as it can draw a huge amount of cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 [quote name=':bcoe' timestamp='1301079564' post='5095816'] Thery're really good, what editor did you use, GIMP? I really like Lucky Fiend and Level Gardna, and they all apply really well to the effects. Did you have to do much editing for them? [/quote] I use PS CS5 and ummm, no, I wouldn't say I used much editing, it just took longer than thinking of their effects :"D I always think of the effect after finding a good image and try to make them match. What I did was add the cursed circle behind the spellcasters, change the background, brightness, contrast, outside glow and add a few things, like Chaos Apprentice's hat (which is Dark Magician Girl's btw xD; ) and the star in Level Gardna's arms. ^^[quote name='chuerta6' timestamp='1301083847' post='5095970'] first 2 cards are great the synchro monster you might want to exclude the battle damage as its powerful already without it the last card is extremely OP as it can draw a huge amount of cards 8/10 [/quote] but the most it can draw is 6.. Maybe if I can restrict its effect for once per duel? and maybe increase the cost from 500 to 1000 LP? would it become more balanced that way? Glad you liked the first 2 ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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