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Love/hate
UP'd/OP'd

Comments and constructive criticism are always welcome
I also edited all of those cards' images to make them look more Yu-gi-oh-ish

So what do you think?~~ ^^

[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/tm.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][b][i]When this monster is Normal Summoned put 1 moon counter on it. When this monster is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard you can Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower
monster from your deck. If this card is targeted by an opponent's card effect that removes this card from play you can remove 1 moon counter from it instead.[/i][/b][/quote]
[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/NWR.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][b][i]Any 2 Spellcaster-type monsters that are both level 5 or higher. When this card is fusion Summoned you can add 1 "Cursed Circle" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.
Your opponent must discard 1 spell or trap card in order to attack this face-up monster. When this monster is removed from the field it is also removed from play.[/i][/b][/quote]
[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/CS.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][b][i]If your opponent discards cards from their hand or Deck to the Graveyard due to a card effect, once per turn you can use 1 of the following effects:
Return one monster on the field to its owner's hand.
or Draw 1 card.[/i][/b][/quote]
[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/rs.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][i][b]When this monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle you can make your opponent unable to Normal Summon any monsters on their next turn.[/b][/i][/quote]
[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/zzta.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][i][b]This monster cannot be special summoned. When this monster is Normal summoned your opponent must special summon all level 4 or lower monsters in their hand in face-up
attack position.These monsters' effects are negated. gain 500 LP for every card your opponent draws outside of their draw phase.[/b][/i][/quote]
[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/nsk.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][b][i]If you are attacked directly you can discard this card to the Graveyard and negate the attack to end the battle phase. On your turn after using this effect you can special summon this monster from your graveyard. If this monster is special summoned it cannot attack and is destroyed at the end phase of the turn it is special summoned.[/i][/b][/quote]
[IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/mrr.jpg[/IMG]

[quote][i][b]You can remove from play 2 or more tuner monsters with a combined level of 7 from your deck to Special Summon this monster from your hand.This monster gains attack x 200
for every removed from play tuner monster.[/b][/i][/quote]
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[quote name='Eduche' timestamp='1301541338' post='5101874']
whoa! i love spellcasters. where did you get that pics? can you teach me how to make a cards like yours?
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pictures you can find everywhere, deviantart, danbooru (mainly where I get my pics from) ^^
Also you need to find good Custom card templates and you're set.
you also need some Photoshop/Gimp knowledge since if you want to make cards like mine you'd need some editing skills. Not just to add the info on them but to change the pictures themselves. Just like how I added the cursed circle and custom backgrounds on some of those.
If you want I can send you some good templates but there are enough on here too so you can just look them up by yourself.

Anyways, I still haven't gotten any criticism and/or reviews so I'm bumping yet again...
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Nice set you have here, Ill do A Rating after i've finished looking at all the cards.

Tsukimae ; Her effect seems balanced but it is pretty useful in the same concept OCG errors

Nornal-Normal

Moon Counter.

8-10

Nightmare Witch Rem ; Mehish the Spell or Trap cost is quite useful but then the only drawback is that your opponent could easily have a card which could deny it's effect.

OCG errors;

[b]"[/b]Any 2 Spellcaster-type monsters that are both level 5 or higher[b]"[/b].
When this card is [b]F[/b]usion Summoned you can add 1 "Cursed Circle" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.
Your opponent must discard 1 [b]S[/b]pell or [b]T[/b]rap card in order to attack this face-up monster. [b]When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is removed from play instead.[/b] P.s I'm not sure If I did this right did confuse me abit :S

Cursed Circle; It's okay wether I would run it in a deck is a different story.

OCG looks good but could've been worded slightly better.

Rhythm Sorcerer ; Well first off you spell Rhythm wrong ;) But the card is very good in the concept that you can completely knock out your opponents next turn leaving them open to a Direct Attack but in that same concept it is slightly OPed you would need a lower attack something a Little bit like Masked Chopper.

OCG: [B]If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle your opponent cannot Normal Summon any monster on their next Main Phase.[/B]

ZZ the Assassin; I'll get straight to the OCG

This monster cannot be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned. When this monster is Normal [b]S[/b]ummoned your opponent must [B]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon all level 4 or lower monsters in their hand in face-up
attack position. gain 500 LP for every card your opponent draws outside of their draw phase.

Noble Silver Knight; Umm Effect is easy to understand but It makes no sense I'll try and word it a bit better.

If your Life Points are attacked directly you can discard this card to your Graveyard and Negate the attack and end the Turn. On your next Standby Phase if you used this card's effect you can Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard. If this monster is Special Summoned it cannot attack and is removed from play at the end of your turn.

I will do the last card soon.

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[quote name='Fiery Red' timestamp='1301740446' post='5107148']
Nice set you have here, Ill do A Rating after i've finished looking at all the cards.

Tsukimae ; Her effect seems balanced but it is pretty useful in the same concept OCG errors

Nornal-Normal

Moon Counter.

8-10

Nightmare Witch Rem ; Mehish the Spell or Trap cost is quite useful but then the only drawback is that your opponent could easily have a card which could deny it's effect.

OCG errors;

[b]"[/b]Any 2 Spellcaster-type monsters that are both level 5 or higher[b]"[/b].
When this card is [b]F[/b]usion Summoned you can add 1 "Cursed Circle" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.
Your opponent must discard 1 [b]S[/b]pell or [b]T[/b]rap card in order to attack this face-up monster. [b]When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is removed from play instead.[/b] P.s I'm not sure If I did this right did confuse me abit :S

Cursed Circle; It's okay wether I would run it in a deck is a different story.

OCG looks good but could've been worded slightly better.

Rhythm Sorcerer ; Well first off you spell Rhythm wrong ;) But the card is very good in the concept that you can completely knock out your opponents next turn leaving them open to a Direct Attack but in that same concept it is slightly OPed you would need a lower attack something a Little bit like Masked Chopper.

OCG: [B]If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle your opponent cannot Normal Summon any monster on their next Main Phase.[/B]

ZZ the Assassin; I'll get straight to the OCG

This monster cannot be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned. When this monster is Normal [b]S[/b]ummoned your opponent must [B]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon all level 4 or lower monsters in their hand in face-up
attack position. gain 500 LP for every card your opponent draws outside of their draw phase.

Noble Silver Knight; Umm Effect is easy to understand but It makes no sense I'll try and word it a bit better.

If your Life Points are attacked directly you can discard this card to your Graveyard and Negate the attack and end the Turn. On your next Standby Phase if you used this card's effect you can Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard. If this monster is Special Summoned it cannot attack and is removed from play at the end of your turn.

I will do the last card soon.
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thank you ^^
Finally someone who cared to comment and review~
I do realize all my mistakes now, thank you ^^

And also for the cursed circle I made it only so it could work well with the Nightmare Witch, otherwise I know it's not very useful ^^ ;

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[quote name='Fiery Red' timestamp='1301763862' post='5108013']
Anytime By The Way I couldn't get around to rating your last card.

Anyway do you fancy a 1v1? I'll PM you the details if you do.
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Oh! I wanted to have a 1v1 for some time now! You're on ^^
Sure, please PM me the details ^^
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