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[center][spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=NSDW EN001 Neoshadow - Chaotic Mutation][img]http://img858.imageshack.us/img858/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:FLIP: Choose 1 "Neoshadow" monster and flip it into face-down Defense Position. You cannot choose "Neoshadow - Chaotic Mutation".[/spoiler]
[spoiler=NSDW EN002 Neoshadow - Behemoth Mech][img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:While you control this face-up Attack Position card, after this card's first attack, you can pay 1500 Life Points to attack again. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent during its second attack is reduced to 0. If this face-up card is selected as the target of an effect of a "Neoshadow" monster that would flip this card face-down, you can remove this card from play to remove the top 5 cards of your opponent's Deck from play.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=NSDW EN003 Neoshadow - Dream Corruptor][img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:FLIP: Choose one monster on your opponent's side of the field. Flip the chosen card face-down. Once per turn decrease the flipped face-down monster's ATK and DEF by 400. When the card is flipped and has 0 ATK remove the card from play.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=NSDW EN004 Neoshadow - Doom Mimic][img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/2504/147628g.jpg[/img]
Lore:FLIP: Choose one flipped face-down monster and flip it. Activate its effect and remove it from play. This card gains the effect of the removed from play monster. Flip this card back to face-down position and negate any battles, if this card was in one, it is only negated when the battle causes this monster to flip. Once this card uses the copied effect at least once you can remove this card from play to flip all "Neoshadow" monsters to face-down position.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=NSDW EN005 Neoshadow - Frostbite][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned you can summon this card in face-down position. FLIP: Flip all monsters on your opponent's side of the field face down. Those cards cannot be flipped face-up for 3 turns exept by an effect of a card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=NSDW EN007 Neoshadow - Silver Streak][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:This monster is also treated as a Beast-Type. FLIP:Destroy the monster card in the same column as this monster, if there is one. Once activated change this card to Defense-Position. When this card is destroyed, flip one face-up "Neoshadow" monster face-down.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=NSDW EN008 Neoshadow - Lunar Tech Wolf][img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:FLIP: Flip 2 face-down monsters face-up then destroy them. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Once per turn when this card is in Attack Position you can decrease this card's ATK by 500 to flip one monster on the field face-down.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=NSDW EN010 Neoshadow - Toxic Assassin][img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore: FLIP: When this card is flipped by being chosen as an attack target destroy that monster. This effect can only be used up to 3 times. If you used this effect 3 times remove this card from play.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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[spoiler=NSDW EN006 Piercing Screech][img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:Select one face-down monster on your opponent's side of the field. That card cannot flip face-up for 2 turns.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=NSDW EN009 Sound Breaker][img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/818/147628.jpg[/img]
Lore:This card can only be activated by destroying 1 "Piercing Screech" on your side of the field. Decrease all your opponent's monster's Level to 1. As long as this card is face-up on the field your opponent must show you their hand. Once per turn, for every magic card in your opponent's hand inflict damage x200. Flip all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field face-down those cards cannot be flipped up as long as this card is face-up on the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy all cards on your side of the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center]
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FLIP: When this card is flipped face up, choose one "Neoshadow" monster and flip it to face down position. You cannot choose a "Neoshadow - Chaotic Mutation" already in face up position.


Should be:

FLIP: Choose 1 "Neoshadow" monster and flip it into face-down Defense Position. You cannot choose "Neoshadow - Chaotic Mutation".

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I'd love to see more Neoshadows. It being a LV2 DARK Fiend 0 ATK, I would love to run them in a quickdraw Deck if they have good flip effects. Great artwork too.
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When this card is in face-up Attack Position it can attack 2 times this turn with a cost of 1500 Life Points. This effect cannot be used to lower your opponent's Life Points to 0. If this card is in face-up position and is chosen by an effect of a "Neoshadow" monster to flip face down, you can remove this card from play to remove the top 5 cards in your opponents deck out of play.

Should be:

While you control this face-up Attack Position card, after this card's first attack, you can pay 1500 Life Points to attack again. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent during its second attack is reduced to 0. If this face-up card is selected as the target of an effect of a "Neoshadow" monster that would flip this card face-down, you can remove this card from play to remove the top 5 cards of your opponent's Deck from play.

FLIP: Choose one face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip this card to the selected monster and change it to Defense-Position. Once per turn, decrease the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 500. When the ATK and DEF reaches 0 destroy the monster. This card can only be unequipped by having
your opponent attack their equipped monster. When this card is unequipped remove it from play. Once the equipped monster is destroyed remove this card from play. This card cannot be chosen to flip into face-down Position

should be:

FLIP: Select one face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. Equip it with this card and change the selected monster to face-up Defense Position. Once per turn, you can decrease the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 500. If the ATK and DEF of the selected monster becomes 0 by this effect, destroy that monster, remove it from play and remove this card from play. When this card would be unequipped by a card effect, remove it from play instead. When the equipped monster is selected as an attack target, remove from play this card. "Neoshadow - Dream Corruptor" cannot be flipped into face-down defense position.

FLIP: This card can only be flipped face-up when it's being attacked by your opponent. Destroy the monster that attacked this and gain DEF equal to half of the destroyed monster. When this effect is used you take 500 damage. When this card is face-up you can remove this card from play and choose one Equip-Spell to your hand then shuffle your Deck.

Should be:

You cannot Flip Summon this face-down card. When this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, this monster is not destroyed, destroy the monster that attacked this card, and this card gains DEF equal to half the DEF of the destroyed monster. After this effect is used, take 500 damage. You can remove this face-up card from play to add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

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I really do not see how these Neoshadow - Dream Corruptor or Neoshadow - Doom Mimic are useful in anyway, whatsoever. I'd rather use a Kisetai than either of them.
Maybe work on better/or use more generic FLIP effects and spruce them up?
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for Behemoth Mech, 3500 atk is a bit too high for lv8. You might want to put special summoning conditions to it. Either that or just up the level for it

It's got a nice milling effect, though I'm not sure there's enough drawbacks on it

Frostbite reminds me a little bit of Light of Intervention, though that one is much more perm, but nevertheless a useful one

They seem quite good, keep them coming

9/10
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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1302403708' post='5126944']
for Behemoth Mech, 3500 atk is a bit too high for lv8. You might want to put special summoning conditions to it. Either that or just up the level for it

It's got a nice milling effect, though I'm not sure there's enough drawbacks on it

Frostbite reminds me a little bit of Light of Intervention, though that one is much more perm, but nevertheless a useful one

They seem quite good, keep them coming

9/10
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Thanks I'm upping the level and lowering the ATK a bit right now.
Btw, glad to see you again I haven't been on in a while. :P

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Ok, let's have a look at Lunar Tech Wolf

if it was pic alone, this would get 10/10

Shame it's lv5, that decreases its potential a bit. That's why what I would do is this

For the flipping monsters face up then killing them, you either keep it at lv5 and then say flip effects aren't activated at that time

or knock it down to lv4, but allow the flip effects to stay (to kill your monster so you can't abuse the effect)

8/10
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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1302814362' post='5138349']
Ok, let's have a look at Lunar Tech Wolf

if it was pic alone, this would get 10/10

Shame it's lv5, that decreases its potential a bit. That's why what I would do is this

For the flipping monsters face up then killing them, you either keep it at lv5 and then say flip effects aren't activated at that time

or knock it down to lv4, but allow the flip effects to stay (to kill your monster so you can't abuse the effect)

8/10
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I'm probably gonna change it to Level 4. It doesn't really do that much damage so it would be more fair.
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