Blacklight Structure Deck: [1/42] [Please point out lore problems!]

[Lunar Origins]

This is my second Archetype I am working on. It is called Blacklight (Fiend/Light type monsters]. It focuses on discarding and milling cards to the graveyard to special summon and or power up monsters.

Current Progress: 2/42.

The first card to go in this deck is: Blacklight Horror.

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Lore: When this card is successfully Tribute Summoned, you can discard 4 cards from your hand to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Horror Token" (Fiend-Type/LIGHT/Level 8/ATK ?/DEF 0). Its attack is equal to the amount of cards in you and your opponents graveyard x 200.

Now for: Blacklight Madman.

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Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, select one monster on the field and equip it to this card. This monster gains that monsters ATK and DEF. If this card would be destroyed, destroy the equipped monster instead and send three cards from the bottom of your deck to the graveyard.

[Vough]

Umm...yeah, don't you think 4 cards is too high? Like discard 2 or 3? Because you could Nuke the field and still have a normal summon for 5 cards.

[Lunar Origins]

[quote name='Vough' timestamp='1301728804' post='5106989']
Umm...yeah, don't you think 4 cards is too high? Like discard 2 or 3? Because you could Nuke the field and still have a normal summon for 5 cards.
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Yeah, I guess four cards seems a bit high. I thought two would be too easy to get out the token, because later in the duel the token would have a massive attack. I guess three would be good.

Added one new card: Blacklight Madman.

[Vough]

When this card is Normal Summoned, select one monster on the field and equip it to this card. This monster gains that monsters ATK and DEF. If this card would be destroyed, destroy the equipped monster instead and send three cards from the bottom of your deck to the graveyard.

SHOULD BE:

When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 monster on the field and equip it to this card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to that monster's respective ATK and DEF. If this card would be destroyed, the equipped monster is destroyed instead, then send the bottom 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.

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Okay effect I guess. There's no monster that gains ATK AND DEF, so I'm not sure how to word thatm which is why respective is on there.

[Lunar Origins]

[quote name='Vough' timestamp='1301772369' post='5108621']
When this card is Normal Summoned, select one monster on the field and equip it to this card. This monster gains that monsters ATK and DEF. If this card would be destroyed, destroy the equipped monster instead and send three cards from the bottom of your deck to the graveyard.

SHOULD BE:

When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 monster on the field and equip it to this card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to that monster's respective ATK and DEF. If this card would be destroyed, the equipped monster is destroyed instead, then send the bottom 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.

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Okay effect I guess. There's no monster that gains ATK AND DEF, so I'm not sure how to word thatm which is why respective is on there.
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Thank you for helping me out on lore! You get 5 points. Lol.