My Most Ultimate Cards

[Torxon]

I wouled love to get a reply with images or somethinf\g else. I am trying to be online and check evryday. Hope to see a response.

Name:
Horxion The Ultimate Dark Rune God Of Destruction

Attribute: Dark

Lv: 12

Effect:
This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be fusion summoned or set. only by having "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon","Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm" and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" on the field and then activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" spell card can this card be summonedto the field. When this card is sucsesfully summoned to the field you lose half your life points.
- For evry Dark-Attribute card in your hand, Deck, Gravyard, field, your opponents hand, Deck, Gravyard or Field, this card gains x500.
- This card cannot be destroyed by any spells, traps or monster effects from your opponents side of the field.
- Once per.turn this card can negate one of the opponents monster attacks.
- Evry 2nd turn this card can destroy evry card on the field, exept itself.
- This card can attack from any side of the field.
- In evryone of the opponents draw Phases you loses 50,000 lifepoints.
[b]- This card cannot be effected by any monster cards, spell cards or trap card.[/b]
(Forgot it on the first one)

Picture Link:
[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9800/375333.jpg[/img]

[Mecha Love]

Dont post links please.

[beefman]

[quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1301847747' post='5111131']
Dont post [b]thumbnails[/b] please.
[/quote]

Fixed.

To make the card bigger, in the generator, click your card after it uploads. A code appears below it, so copy and paste the whole thing into your thread. About the small text, copy and paste the effect below it, then people can read it. Okay?

[Torxon]

[quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1301847747' post='5111131']
Dont post links please.
[/quote]
ok, thx for the tip, ill do it now

[Sorin Markov]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Fusion Summoned except by having "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon", "Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm" and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" on the field and then activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" spell card can this card be summoned to the field. When this card is successfully summoned to the field you lose half your life points.
- For every Dark-Attribute card in your hand, Deck, Graveyard, field, your opponents hand, Deck, Graveyard or Field, this card gains x500.
- This card cannot be destroyed by any spells, traps or monster effects from your opponents side of the field.
- Once per turn this card can negate one of the opponent’s monster attacks.
- Every 2nd turn this card can destroy every card on the field, except itself.
- This card can attack from any side of the field.
- [b]In every one of the opponents draw Phases you loses 50,000 Life Points.[/b]
I would change 50,000 to 500-1,000

[beefman]

I'll start with an OCG fix.

This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]or Fusion S[/b]ummoned or [b]S[/b]et. [s]This card cannot be fusion summoned or set.[/s] [b]This card can only be Special Summoned when you control[/b] [s]only by having[/s] "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon", "Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm"[b],[/b] and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" [s]on the field[/s] and [s]then[/s] [b]you[/b] activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" [s]spell card can this card be summonedto the field[/s]. When this card is suc[b]c[/b]esfully [b]S[/b]ummoned to the field you [s]lose[/s] [b]must pay[/b] half [b]of[/b] your [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints. [s]-[/s] For [b]evry[/b] each D[b]ARK[/b][s]-Attribute[/s]card in [s]your[/s] [b]either player's[/b] hand, Deck, Grav[b]e[/b]yard, [b]or[/b] field,[s] your opponents hand, Deck, Gravyard or Field,[/s] this card gains [s]x[/s]500 [b]ATK and DEF[/b]. [s]-[/s] This card cannot be destroyed by [s]any[/s] [b]your opponent's [/b]spells, traps[b],[/b] or monster effects [s]from your opponents side of the field[/s]. [s]-[/s] Once per [s].[/s] turn[b],[/b] this card can negate one of the [b]attacks of an[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s monster. [s]- Every 2nd[/s] [b]Once per 2[/b] turn[b]s[/b] this card can destroy ev[b]e[/b]ry card on the field, exept itself. [b]-[/b] [s]This card can attack from any side of the field.[/s] [b]Either player can declare an attack with this card.[/b] [s]- In evryone of the[/s] [b]During each of your[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s [b]D[/b]raw Phases you lose[s]s[/s] 50,000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints.

Looking at this card, I can immediately say two things:

1. The effect is too long and complicated.
2. This card is useless.

See, it goes around with, say, 4000 ATK and DEF or something, but I'll give you a play-by-play of the duel when you summon it.

You: Yeah! It took 50 turns to get all the requirements down, but I'm finally gonna summon this beast! I activate the ritual spell card -
Him: What? a ritual to summon a fusion card? Doesn't make sense.
You: Don't care. So, now I can summon... um... Ho... Horxion the Ulti...mate... Dark... Rune of... Des...destruc...tion. Yeah!
Him: That's a dang long name.
You: Don't care. So, by reducing my life points to 2000, I can get it to the field! And it has... how many darks do you have?
Him: None. I run Lights.
You: Okay... I have... 8 darks! So it's ATK and DEF are 4000! I use it's effect to wipe out all cards on the field except itself.
Him: Gasp!
You: Attack him directly!
Him: Negate Attack, foo!
You: Dang! I end.
Him: I draw, so you lose 50, 000 life points! I win!
You: Useless pile of paper! *Rips card in half*

Takes forever to summon, wastes your LP, has SO many ways to negate it, and at the end, you lose 50, 000 life points.

What were you thinking???

Overall rate: 3/10

[Torxon]

[quote name='MechaSanphred' timestamp='1302038555' post='5116876']
I'll start with an OCG fix.

This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]or Fusion S[/b]ummoned or [b]S[/b]et. [s]This card cannot be fusion summoned or set.[/s] [b]This card can only be Special Summoned when you control[/b] [s]only by having[/s] "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon", "Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm"[b],[/b] and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" [s]on the field[/s] and [s]then[/s] [b]you[/b] activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" [s]spell card can this card be summonedto the field[/s]. When this card is suc[b]c[/b]esfully [b]S[/b]ummoned to the field you [s]lose[/s] [b]must pay[/b] half [b]of[/b] your [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints. [s]-[/s] For [b]evry[/b] each D[b]ARK[/b][s]-Attribute[/s]card in [s]your[/s] [b]either player's[/b] hand, Deck, Grav[b]e[/b]yard, [b]or[/b] field,[s] your opponents hand, Deck, Gravyard or Field,[/s] this card gains [s]x[/s]500 [b]ATK and DEF[/b]. [s]-[/s] This card cannot be destroyed by [s]any[/s] [b]your opponent's [/b]spells, traps[b],[/b] or monster effects [s]from your opponents side of the field[/s]. [s]-[/s] Once per [s].[/s] turn[b],[/b] this card can negate one of the [b]attacks of an[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s monster. [s]- Every 2nd[/s] [b]Once per 2[/b] turn[b]s[/b] this card can destroy ev[b]e[/b]ry card on the field, exept itself. [b]-[/b] [s]This card can attack from any side of the field.[/s] [b]Either player can declare an attack with this card.[/b] [s]- In evryone of the[/s] [b]During each of your[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s [b]D[/b]raw Phases you lose[s]s[/s] 50,000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints.

Looking at this card, I can immediately say two things:

1. The effect is too long and complicated.
2. This card is useless.

See, it goes around with, say, 4000 ATK and DEF or something, but I'll give you a play-by-play of the duel when you summon it.

You: Yeah! It took 50 turns to get all the requirements down, but I'm finally gonna summon this beast! I activate the ritual spell card -
Him: What? a ritual to summon a fusion card? Doesn't make sense.
You: Don't care. So, now I can summon... um... Ho... Horxion the Ulti...mate... Dark... Rune of... Des...destruc...tion. Yeah!
Him: That's a dang long name.
You: Don't care. So, by reducing my life points to 2000, I can get it to the field! And it has... how many darks do you have?
Him: None. I run Lights.
You: Okay... I have... 8 darks! So it's ATK and DEF are 4000! I use it's effect to wipe out all cards on the field except itself.
Him: Gasp!
You: Attack him directly!
Him: Negate Attack, foo!
You: Dang! I end.
Him: I draw, so you lose 50, 000 life points! I win!
You: Useless pile of paper! *Rips card in half*

Takes forever to summon, wastes your LP, has SO many ways to negate it, and at the end, you lose 50, 000 life points.

What were you thinking???

Overall rate: 3/10
[/quote]
i was thinking that it would be an ultimate price for an ultimate card. This is version on (a prptotype) if you would like. i add stuff too it all the time. And i also have a card that lets me summone all the goods in one turn, so no waiting only one or two turns. pluss i also have a card that allowes me to keep 1 life point anyways what happens. (problem fixed)

Seacond.
The version two it cannot be effected by any spels, traps or monsters/monster effects at all. (problem fixed)

Thirdly.
I like the long name, so what ??? are you gonna mok me then go ahead.

And at last.
in version two i get x1000 ATK and DEF points, so with my 35 other Dark monsters i have 35000 ATK and def points. It can also not be destroyed in battle in version 2.

Then say the other problems and i will see if i can fix the for the next version

[quote name='MechaSanphred' timestamp='1302038555' post='5116876']
I'll start with an OCG fix.

This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]or Fusion S[/b]ummoned or [b]S[/b]et. [s]This card cannot be fusion summoned or set.[/s] [b]This card can only be Special Summoned when you control[/b] [s]only by having[/s] "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon", "Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm"[b],[/b] and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" [s]on the field[/s] and [s]then[/s] [b]you[/b] activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" [s]spell card can this card be summonedto the field[/s]. When this card is suc[b]c[/b]esfully [b]S[/b]ummoned to the field you [s]lose[/s] [b]must pay[/b] half [b]of[/b] your [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints. [s]-[/s] For [b]evry[/b] each D[b]ARK[/b][s]-Attribute[/s]card in [s]your[/s] [b]either player's[/b] hand, Deck, Grav[b]e[/b]yard, [b]or[/b] field,[s] your opponents hand, Deck, Gravyard or Field,[/s] this card gains [s]x[/s]500 [b]ATK and DEF[/b]. [s]-[/s] This card cannot be destroyed by [s]any[/s] [b]your opponent's [/b]spells, traps[b],[/b] or monster effects [s]from your opponents side of the field[/s]. [s]-[/s] Once per [s].[/s] turn[b],[/b] this card can negate one of the [b]attacks of an[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s monster. [s]- Every 2nd[/s] [b]Once per 2[/b] turn[b]s[/b] this card can destroy ev[b]e[/b]ry card on the field, exept itself. [b]-[/b] [s]This card can attack from any side of the field.[/s] [b]Either player can declare an attack with this card.[/b] [s]- In evryone of the[/s] [b]During each of your[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s [b]D[/b]raw Phases you lose[s]s[/s] 50,000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints.

Looking at this card, I can immediately say two things:

1. The effect is too long and complicated.
2. This card is useless.

See, it goes around with, say, 4000 ATK and DEF or something, but I'll give you a play-by-play of the duel when you summon it.

You: Yeah! It took 50 turns to get all the requirements down, but I'm finally gonna summon this beast! I activate the ritual spell card -
Him: What? a ritual to summon a fusion card? Doesn't make sense.
You: Don't care. So, now I can summon... um... Ho... Horxion the Ulti...mate... Dark... Rune of... Des...destruc...tion. Yeah!
Him: That's a dang long name.
You: Don't care. So, by reducing my life points to 2000, I can get it to the field! And it has... how many darks do you have?
Him: None. I run Lights.
You: Okay... I have... 8 darks! So it's ATK and DEF are 4000! I use it's effect to wipe out all cards on the field except itself.
Him: Gasp!
You: Attack him directly!
Him: Negate Attack, foo!
You: Dang! I end.
Him: I draw, so you lose 50, 000 life points! I win!
You: Useless pile of paper! *Rips card in half*

Takes forever to summon, wastes your LP, has SO many ways to negate it, and at the end, you lose 50, 000 life points.

What were you thinking???

Overall rate: 3/10
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And by the way, its not a ritual fusion card, or mabye you can call it that but the point is that its only one fusion card that can summone thi card and that it the card in the effect.

Just noticed something, both players can't use the card, but i can send it over to the opponents side of the field to attack, i know i am a loser but i stole the idea from the ultimate secret beast from yugioh GX.

[Mugendramon]

It's been like forevever since I last posted. Oh well. Counter Critisize, go![quote name='MechaSanphred' timestamp='1302038555' post='5116876']
I'll start with an OCG fix.

This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]or Fusion S[/b]ummoned or [b]S[/b]et. [s]This card cannot be fusion summoned or set.[/s] [b]This card can only be Special Summoned when you control[/b] [s]only by having[/s] "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon", "Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm"[b],[/b] and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" [s]on the field[/s] and [s]then[/s] [b]you[/b] activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" [s]spell card can this card be summonedto the field[/s]. When this card is suc[b]c[/b]esfully [b]S[/b]ummoned to the field you [s]lose[/s] [b]must pay[/b] half [b]of[/b] your [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints. [s]-[/s] For [b]evry[/b] each D[b]ARK[/b][s]-Attribute[/s]card in [s]your[/s] [b]either player's[/b] hand, Deck, Grav[b]e[/b]yard, [b]or[/b] field,[s] your opponents hand, Deck, Gravyard or Field,[/s] this card gains [s]x[/s]500 [b]ATK and DEF[/b]. [s]-[/s] This card cannot be destroyed by [s]any[/s] [b]your opponent's [/b]spells, traps[b],[/b] or monster effects [s]from your opponents side of the field[/s]. [s]-[/s] Once per [s].[/s] turn[b],[/b] this card can negate one of the [b]attacks of an[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s monster. [s]- Every 2nd[/s] [b]Once per 2[/b] turn[b]s[/b] this card can destroy ev[b]e[/b]ry card on the field, exept itself. [b]-[/b] [s]This card can attack from any side of the field.[/s] [b]Either player can declare an attack with this card.[/b] [s]- In evryone of the[/s] [b]During each of your[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s [b]D[/b]raw Phases you lose[s]s[/s] 50,000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints.

[i]Correction, perfect. Except for (maybe): [/i][s]Once per 2 turns[/s] [b]Once every 2 turns,[/b]
[i][b]
[/b][/i]
[i][b]On a side note, regarding this effect, what is the actual point. You might as well make it be able to do it 34 times per turn, since you won't really get a second chance if you fail the[/b][/i][i][b] turn you Summon him.[/b][/i]

Looking at this card, I can immediately say two things:

1. The effect is too long and complicated. [b][i]Agreed.[/i][/b]
2. This card is useless. [b][i]Rather than useless, I'd stick to say it's overcopmlicated. A pseudo-guaranteed kill, and a sure loss if you fail.[/i][/b]

See, it goes around with, say, 4000 ATK and DEF or something, but I'll give you a play-by-play of the duel when you summon it.

You: Yeah! It took 50 turns to get all the requirements down, but I'm finally gonna summon this beast! I activate the ritual spell card -
Him: What? a ritual to summon a fusion card? Doesn't make sense.
You: Don't care. So, now I can summon... um... Ho... Horxion the Ulti...mate... Dark... Rune of... Des...destruc...tion. Yeah!
Him: That's a dang long name.
You: Don't care. So, by reducing my life points to 2000, I can get it to the field! And it has... how many darks do you have?
Him: None. I run Lights.
You: Okay... I have... 8 darks! So it's ATK and DEF are 4000! I use it's effect to[i] wipe out all cards on the field except itself.[/i]
Him: Gasp!
You: Attack him directly!
Him: Negate Attack, foo! [i](wipe out all cards on the field except itself.) [b]<---- you wrote that yourself, two lines above. ^^[/b][/i]
You: [s]Dang! I end.[/s] [b]Dude... I kinda wiped your field just now...[/b]
Him:[s] I draw, so you lose 50, 000 life points! I win![/s] [b]Damn! I lose![/b]
You: [s]Useless pile of paper![/s] [b]Meh. You're too situational.[/b] *Rips card in half*

Takes forever to summon, wastes your LP, has SO many ways to negate it, and at the end, you lose 50, 000 life points.

What were you thinking???

Overall rate: 3/10
[b][i]Even after what I've said, it roughly deserves a 5/10[/i][/b]
[/quote]

New Member, alright. Since it's in AoC, it's not really necessary for it to be balanced, but who would dedicate a Deck to this? Did you even do the rest of the cards this one card mentions? Try harder, you'll become a fine CardMaker with enough practice.

[Expelsword]

[img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/8536/199941.jpg[/img]

[beefman]

[quote name='Expelsword' timestamp='1302127835' post='5118948']
[img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/8536/199941.jpg[/img]
[/quote]

You'd think a 5 star would know not to engage in idiocy like that...

[Expelsword]

And he's not?

The card has so many different clauses and is so difficult to summon[i] and[/i] the fact it is depressingly easy to sidestep makes it nothing short of a farce.

OCG was also terrible. but that's been corrected so... well, why not:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except from the Extra Deck by having "Aleriax The Dark Rune Dragon","Arxodius The Lord Of Dark Realm" and "Axanoid The Dark God Of Destruction" on your side of the field when you activate "The Ultimate Dark God Ritual" When this card is Summoned, halve your Life Points. During your next Draw Phase, destroy all other cards on the field.

- For every DARK monster in either player's hand, Deck, Graveyard, or on the field, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF.
- Once per turn, you can negate one attack by an opponent's monster.
- This card can attack during either player's Battle Phase.
- This card is unaffected by the effects of other monster, Spell and Trap Cards.
- During your opponent's Standby Phase, you take 50,000 damage.


Overall, a 1/10 for the picture, actually rather interesting.