hatepain99 Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 my secound post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGenuine Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Don't post attachment click on card and link appears post link here thanxno one listens to me dam it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Ok first of don't do the ATK like that almost every newb does that and it gets old. As for the effect it is horrendously OPed and your OCG sucks. Lastly the pic is bad so overall its just not a very good card at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatepain99 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 [img]http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4771/343683.jpg[/img][img]http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4771/343683.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Grave Warrior is Oped... It has a monster reborn effect which was once banned and now is limited. Furthermore , this is a Level 4 Tuner monster with 1900 ATK. Level 4 Tuners usually don't have this much ATK. I think that the strongest Level 4 Tuner monster in ATK is [color=#3A3A3A][font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=3]Mist Valley Soldier which has only 1700 ATK. The pic isn't that good so I think you should redo this.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#3A3A3A][font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=3]Crimson Assasin (I think it should be Assas[b][i][u]s[/u][/i][/b]in but nevermind) isn't that useful. If it was a Watt monster it could be better. So.... You should make some changes on this too.[/size][/font][/color] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][size="2"][color="#3a3a3a"]As for your OCG : The first letter in your cards' name should be capitalized. It should be [/color][/size][/font][b][i][u]G[/u][/i][/b][font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][size="2"][color="#3a3a3a"]rave [/color][/size][/font][b][i][u]W[/u][/i][/b][font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][size="2"][color="#3a3a3a"]arrior not grave warrior[/color][/size][/font] [color=#3A3A3A][font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=3]and [i][u][b]C[/b][/u][/i]rimson [i][u][b]A[/b][/u][/i]ssasin not crimson assasin. [/size][/font][/color][font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][size="2"][color="#3a3a3a"]Same goes for the types. The first letter should be capitalized.[/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 what grio said is pretty much what i would say. the tuner is reborn, so that is pretty bad. and the assasin just doesnt help any deck i can think of Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatepain99 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 [u]k thank ill try to make them better[/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 keep trying, youll get there eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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