shadowninja196 Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [size="5"]Select 1 face-up monster on the Field. Flip a coin, if the result is heads, increase the monster's ATK by half it's original ATK, otherwise half it's original ATK.[/size] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/4930/389517.jpg[/img] Please Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifespark Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='shadowninja196' timestamp='1301899346' post='5113360'] [size="5"]Select 1 monster on the Field. Roll a six-sided die, if the result is an odd number, increase the monster's ATK by half it's original ATK, otherwise half it's original ATK.[/size] Please Comment [/quote] I'm sure people will want to comment on how you've worded the card, but since what I really care about are cards' effects, I'll comment on just that. First, a small detail, I think it would have to be a face-up monster. Secondly, instead of a die roll, since there are only two outcomes, perhaps a coin flip would be better? There are also a lot of luck cards that can be used with coin flips, like "Second Coin Toss", so I think it would be a little more fun as well. The effect is interesting, and the concept is good. I like this card. Especially since it has more than one use. You can try to halve an opponent's monster's attack with it if the situation calls for it. It reminds me of this: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Goddess_of_Whim Not quite the same, but similar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowninja196 Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='lifespark' timestamp='1301902156' post='5113393'] I'm sure people will want to comment on how you've worded the card, but since what I really care about are cards' effects, I'll comment on just that. First, a small detail, I think it would have to be a face-up monster. Secondly, instead of a die roll, since there are only two outcomes, perhaps a coin flip would be better? There are also a lot of luck cards that can be used with coin flips, like "Second Coin Toss", so I think it would be a little more fun as well. The effect is interesting, and the concept is good. I like this card. Especially since it has more than one use. You can try to halve an opponent's monster's attack with it if the situation calls for it. It reminds me of this: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Goddess_of_Whim Not quite the same, but similar. [/quote] Thank you for your comment I fixed the card up more now with your advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 For a new member, it's a pretty good and simple effect. Nice Make your newer card effects a little more original OCG Fix: [quote]Select 1 face-up monster and flip a coin. If the result is •Heads: That monster gains ATK equal to half its original ATK. •Tails: That monster's original ATK is halved.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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