ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Hey Guys this is my first Yu-Gi-Oh! Card that ive made. just tell me what i can improve and what not. Here it is. Welcome The The Alliance: Gravekeepers Gunslinger! [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/6886/390078.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifespark Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='ChaosScene' timestamp='1301901446' post='5113386'] Hey Guys this is my first Yu-Gi-Oh! Card that ive made. just tell me what i can improve and what not. Here it is. Welcome The The Alliance: Gravekeepers Gunslinger! [attachment=31879:Gravekeepers Gunslinger.jpg] [/quote] It's always nice seeing new people here. I enjoy looking at all the cards people make. First, if you go back to the card maker, and click on the picture of the finished card, a loading bar will appear underneath it. Once the loading finishes, copy the code it shows, and paste it into your forum post to display the full-size card, without having to attach it. You can use the Edit button on the bottom right of your post to change it. I look forward to seeing your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='lifespark' timestamp='1301901638' post='5113389'] It's always nice seeing new people here. I enjoy looking at all the cards people make. First, if you go back to the card maker, and click on the picture of the finished card, a loading bar will appear underneath it. Once the loading finishes, copy the code it shows, and paste it into your forum post to display the full-size card, without having to attach it. You can use the Edit button on the bottom right of your post to change it. I look forward to seeing your card. [/quote] thanks! thats alot easier than saving to my computer XD sorry i a noob at this site, but eh, ill learn. will change the pic now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 First, make it an effect monster, and change that eyeburn pic. But the effect, I'd say, is badass. You actually understand the meta decks too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant' timestamp='1301901762' post='5113391'] First, make it an effect monster, and change that eyeburn pic. But the effect, I'd say, is badass. You actually understand the meta decks too. [/quote] best form of gunslinger picutre i could find... :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifespark Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant' timestamp='1301901762' post='5113391'] First, make it an effect monster, and change that eyeburn pic. But the effect, I'd say, is badass. You actually understand the meta decks too. [/quote] Such a fun sounding effect, so powerful, and yet, maybe a little too good? I think it might be a little strong for how easy it is to summon, or a little too easy to summon for how strong it is. Remember most Gravekeeper's decks will also always have Necrovalley out as well, making it a 3000 that destroys a card, and costs only 1 card to bring out. In addition, Gravekeeper's have great revival power, using Rite of Spirit and Gravekeeper's Chief to bring back cards. This could be repeatedly summoned to destroy many cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Well yeah, [i]possibly[/i] a bit too strong. Maybe lower its ATK to 2000, make it LV 6, x-out its current SS effect, and make its bomb only work when it gets tribute summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='lifespark' timestamp='1301902658' post='5113399'] Such a fun sounding effect, so powerful, and yet, maybe a little too good? I think it might be a little strong for how easy it is to summon, or a little too easy to summon for how strong it is. Remember most Gravekeeper's decks will also always have Necrovalley out as well, making it a 3000 that destroys a card, and costs only 1 card to bring out. In addition, Gravekeeper's have great revival power, using Rite of Spirit and Gravekeeper's Chief to bring back cards. This could be repeatedly summoned to destroy many cards. [/quote] it takes 2 tributes to summon it.. its 7-star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifespark Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='ChaosScene' timestamp='1301904468' post='5113420'] it takes 2 tributes to summon it.. its 7-star [/quote] It says you can special summon it by tributing a Gravekeeper's monster. That means on the first turn, you could normal summon any low level gravekeeper, then immediately tribute it to bring this out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='lifespark' timestamp='1301905141' post='5113434'] It says you can special summon it by tributing a Gravekeeper's monster. That means on the first turn, you could normal summon any low level gravekeeper, then immediately tribute it to bring this out. [/quote] Gravekeepers Visionary - You can normal summon this card by tributing 1 gravekeepers monster. This card gains 200 atk for each gravekeepers monster in your graveyard. if this face-up card on the field would be destroyed, you can discard 1 gravekeepers monster instead. which would make that card move powered the mine. so its not really To powerful.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifespark Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='ChaosScene' timestamp='1301905783' post='5113447'] Gravekeepers Visionary - You can normal summon this card by tributing 1 gravekeepers monster. This card gains 200 atk for each gravekeepers monster in your graveyard. if this face-up card on the field would be destroyed, you can discard 1 gravekeepers monster instead. which would make that card move powered the mine. so its not really To powerful.. [/quote] Gravekeeper's Visionary is good, but it is a normal summon. This means you have to use up one of your precious turns to summon it, whereas a special summon doesn't take an extra turn at all. It's actually a huge difference, even if it doesn't seem like it at first glance. If yours were normal summon, it wouldn't be overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='lifespark' timestamp='1301906471' post='5113453'] Gravekeeper's Visionary is good, but it is a normal summon. This means you have to use up one of your precious turns to summon it, whereas a special summon doesn't take an extra turn at all. It's actually a huge difference, even if it doesn't seem like it at first glance. If yours were normal summon, it wouldn't be overpowered. [/quote] good thinking, that i will change. thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neither Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 hope thats better! And thanks neither! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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