Mazaki Anzu Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Mario [img]http://r20.img-up.net/SuperMariobemm.png[/img] Yoshi [img]http://l24.img-up.net/Yoshibpzfr.png[/img] Kirby [img]http://l94.img-up.net/Kirbykos3a.png[/img] Samus [img]http://n11.img-up.net/Samus0wyk3.png[/img] Master Hand [img]http://n70.img-up.net/MasterHandqvo4.png[/img] -Yeah- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [code][img][/img][/code] Place those around each of your links please. It will look like this, for example. [code][img]http://c16.img-up.net/SuperMario1ugd.jpg[/img][/code] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 For a new member, these are pretty good. Though, I would advise giving them more effects, as most of us, myself excluded, don't seem to like Vanilla monsters for whatever reason. You need to work on your OCG (Official Card Grammar) a bit though, MH's effect has a few grammatical errors of both kinds. It would correct it myself, but I haven't made a card in who knows how long. I give them an 8/10. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazaki Anzu Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='ZombiePigman' timestamp='1301939825' post='5114145'] For a new member, these are pretty good. Though, I would advise giving them more effects, as most of us, myself excluded, don't seem to like Vanilla monsters for whatever reason. You need to work on your OCG (Official Card Grammar) a bit though, MH's effect has a few grammatical errors of both kinds. It would correct it myself, but I haven't made a card in who knows how long. I give them an 8/10. Keep up the good work. [/quote] thanks for the feedback. i'm german so english isn't my first language. what are vanilla cards? normal monsters? whats wrong with normal monsters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Normal monsters (aka Vanillas here) are usually not all that playable because they have no effect, so without support cards (Equip Spells, Field Spells, Traps, etc.), they are usually useless in playable decks. I do plan to review your cards, but first, please actually post the images and not the image links. Refer to my first post for how to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazaki Anzu Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1301940755' post='5114170'] Normal monsters (aka Vanillas here) are usually not all that playable because they have no effect, so without support cards (Equip Spells, Field Spells, Traps, etc.), they are usually useless in playable decks. I do plan to review your cards, but first, please actually post the images and not the image links. Refer to my first post for how to do that. [/quote] done but my cards are a bit large Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Indeed they are. Must be because you used something other than usual. Still though, it helps. Super Mario- In all honesty, he needs higher ATK/DEF and some support cards. Not bad though for a beginning. Yoshi- Also needs support. Kirby- I would raise his ATK to 1000 at least. At most, 1500 ATK. He's meant to be a beatstick, but it doesn't work out well with the stats he has. Great OCG though. Samus- Higher ATK (2500-2800) would be great. So would a little support. Master Hand- "Special Summoned or Set" should just be "Special Summoned". Otherwise it is pretty decent, especially first turn. Overall, I'm impressed by your grasp of English, as your English from a secondary language is better than most people with English as a primary language. What this really needs are more support cards (as if you didn't notice that). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazaki Anzu Posted April 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1301942289' post='5114212'] Indeed they are. Must be because you used something other than usual. Still though, it helps. Super Mario- In all honesty, he needs higher ATK/DEF and some support cards. Not bad though for a beginning. Yoshi- Also needs support. Kirby- I would raise his ATK to 1000 at least. At most, 1500 ATK. He's meant to be a beatstick, but it doesn't work out well with the stats he has. Great OCG though. Samus- Higher ATK (2500-2800) would be great. So would a little support. Master Hand- "Special Summoned or Set" should just be "Special Summoned". Otherwise it is pretty decent, especially first turn. Overall, I'm impressed by your grasp of English, as your English from a secondary language is better than most people with English as a primary language. What this really needs are more support cards (as if you didn't notice that). [/quote] thank you =3 to mario: i gave him so low atk and def in order to make my opponent underestimate him and then i will activate the support cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGS BLOOD MON3Y Posted April 7, 2011 Report Share Posted April 7, 2011 OMG i love you for making mario suck lol. I love the fact that kirby is beast. If you make Captin Falcon the effect should be: Through the epic-ness of super chuck norris's might this card Falcon Punches the opponents life point for 8000 damage. LMFAO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachary2134 Posted April 7, 2011 Report Share Posted April 7, 2011 here are some i made [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/7862/392009.jpg[/img] [img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/7862/392009.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/1685/392009g.jpg[/img] i'll make more laterwhoops, i accedentally used the wrong mario! effect should be: for every mario or peach on the field, mario gains 100 ATK points. PLZ COMMENT ON HOW I COULD MAKE THESE BETTER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted April 7, 2011 Report Share Posted April 7, 2011 if you want to post cards you should post your own thread for the owner of this thread: if English really is your secondary language, your good for a beginner your English isn't bad, and your OCG isn't as bad as some of the others i like it, but in terms of the card itself, it can be a bit buffed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 A "wow" for a first-timer. In Master Hand, it says 500 points. I'd say it's 500 ATK and DEF. Also, put the lore (effect) on the bottom of a card so that we can fix OCG and comment but it's not required though. 8/10! I'd expect a good future in Custom Cards! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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