CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [center][b]It's good to be back YCM. It's been around 5 months since I left, but I'm back now. And I'm gonna re-post my shop(after I get the old one locked), make cards etc. I haven't made a card in months so I'm a bit rusty. Image Credit goes to Jazin Kay. Please Rate and Comment. [img]http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee242/susha111/Dylan/CTGEdited-1.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play and tributing 1 face-up Lv 6 or higher monster you control. While you control this face-up monster, all face-up monsters your opponent controls lose 300 ATK during each of your End Phases. When this card destroys a monster, you can pay 600 Life Points to send the destroyed card to the bottom of your opponent's Deck. I say to all the old card makers out there, how's it been? And I hope any new card makers have been enjoying it on YCM.[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 osup renji Well, first off, the Summoning clause is to costy. Then, it has a verrrryyyy slow effect that weakens opponent's monsters. Last effect is good, but it's just outshined by the bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [b]Nice to see you again Smesh. I thought that it would be OP'd if it was just 1 monster and 3 monsters cards that you need to remove from play since you could summon it very fast with the right Deck. Should I maybe change it to 1 or 2 monsters that you need to remove or something else? The 2nd effect does seem slow, now that I think if it. Would 200 work?[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vough Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 Last Effect - I think that would be a bit...Unfair. You could, essentially, steal your opponent's monsters if they forget to get them after the Duel, usually those effects return them to the bottom of your Opponent's Deck. Also, I think the draining effect should be either 200 or 300, not 100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [b]@Vough That could be a problem, I may change it. Edited 100 ATK to 300 ATK.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 I think that shoving the opponent's monster into your Deck would warrant the conditions, since it prevents your opponent from doing anything with them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [b]@Tsukasa Hiiragi- Sorry, but I don't understand what you mean by that.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [quote name='Lieutenant Renji' timestamp='1301963093' post='5115143'] [b]When this card destroys a monster, you can pay 600 Life Points to send the destroyed card to the bottom of your Deck.[/b] [/quote] I think that this rationalizes the Summoning requirements, because your opponent can't do much to the cards in your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 To start off, those are quite the heavy requirements, is heavy the right word? Either way, it's quite, steep (once again, most likely a misuse of the word). The card however, is most likely made to run with Dark Armed Dragon. It's effect lingers, which I like, slowly decreasing your opponent's monsters ATK stat turn by turn. It's last effect however, could be a problem. Being able to recycle any monster this runs over to your Deck (even if it's your opponent's), seems a bit, I guess cruel. I'd either make it 600 to return it to the bottom of the [b]owner's[/b] Deck, or maybe a cost of say 1000 to remove the monster (and possibly all other monsters with the same name in the hand, Deck, whatever) from play. Otherwise, it's a decent card. I think your overdoing it on it's stats though. Also, welcome back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ss2phil Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 I so like this card ! Easy to summon and strong enough to give your opponent a hard time. However like that other guy said, you could leave with your opponent's monsters at the end of the duel with that last effect. I'd say maybe change it so it goes to your graveyard instead? Anyways good work guy i don't know ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [b]@ Anbu-of-Sand- Edited effect to make it your opponent's Deck instead of yours. I edited only the lore this time(too lazy to edit the card itself). Thanks for the comment and good to see you again man. @ss2phil- Thanks. I've edited it to send the card to the bottom your opponent's Deck.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 This monster isn't half bad. It is pretty balanced, weakens monsters and makes sure your opponent doesn't build up a Graveyard advantage to set up for the summoning of monsters. Nice ATK and DEF and great artwork. (HOW THE HECK DID YOU GET THAT AWESOME TRIM IN THE CARD?! ) Rate: 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [b]@Cody Frost- Thanks, I edited it myself. It's a border recolor, a bunch of Shops offer them.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [quote name='Lieutenant Renji' timestamp='1302041703' post='5117005'] [b]@Cody Frost- Thanks, I edited it myself. It's a border recolor, a bunch of Shops offer them.[/b] [/quote] You are talking about shops here in YCM right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [b]Yeah, it's in the Graphic Design Section on the home page.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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