Lunar Origins Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 Here are my new cards, the Machinas! Please comment and point out OCG errors! [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/fv8qdw.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/a166wx.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/105s9rn.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/21jss9h.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/4g6zit.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/24mxmkz.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/wrje6w.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/oiw2u9.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/68zr6p.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DRAPHINIX Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 The cards aren't bad. You said they are Machina cards, so i was wondering about their attribute, light? I thought earth would have made more sense, unless you turned them into a sub-archetype. Also for Deletion Matrix, its basically, reinforcement of the army for machine types, i thought you might want to restrict it like only earth machine types, or to go with the card name, by having to remove a machine type monster from play as a cost. Machina Dimensional Cannon, it says you can use this effect once per turn, but its a normal spell card, contradiction? Machina Queen, is OP, even though her effect only activates once per turn, you can summon another one, then use its effect to summon one more, so basically you can get three out on the field in one turn then get out a machina fortress. I say restrict her effect to only level 4 or lower and choose only graveyard or removed from play. Machina Repeater, is also Op, she can easily be special summon by great machina destroyer, foolish burial etc. Also due to its wording, it can attack more than once if it keep destroying monsters, and attack directly also. You should restrict it to only attack once more if it destroys a monster by battle. Machina Sychron seems ok. You should make the synchro for it. Machina Virus Spreader, its says returns to owners hand, does it mean to you or your opponent, and if it does return to your hand, by having Machina Queen and Machina Dimensional Cannon(if continuous spell card), you can destroy any face-up monster, while inflicting damage to your opponent. Okay cards, you just have to fix a few things, by the way, where did you get the pictures for Deletion Matrix and Machina Repeater? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 Thank you for your review of these cards! To answer some questions: I did want to make these LIGHT type monsters, but EARTH does make more sense. And not a bad idea for making Deletion Matrix remove machines from play! Makes it not so OP'd. As for the cannon... Meant to have it continuous, but forgot to actually put that setting on. Yes, I realized the Queen is OP. Might make it so you may only activate 1 Machina Queen per turn. (In truth, I wanted a Machina like Red Eyes Darkness Metal.) I'll restrict it to one more attack. It is really easy to summon- basically why I made "Deletion Matrix" the way it is. I'm making a Synchro for the Synchron, haha. But with Queen, Cannon, and Destroyer on the field, you can destroy 1 card, do 1000 damage, and summon a monster... oops, OP'd. And I got all images from JazinKay. They seemed to fit the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DRAPHINIX Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 No thank you for reading my rant lol. For Machina Queen, you might want to add the restriction it can't special summon another Machine Queen, similar to REDMD. Can't wait for the Synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosScene Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 nice cards! go together well, not to OP. except remove 1 machine type monster to deal 1000 damage to your opponents LP. its good, but i think 1000 is a bit much, just my opinion. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted April 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 Thanks! Updating cards in a bit. Adding Synchro.Added Synchro: Great Machina Creator [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/68zr6p.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 The cards are good, but Machina Queen is OPed. You can swarm level 8 monsters fairly easily...This has been stated above. The rest of the cards seem good but for some reason I'm thinking that LIGHT does not fit their attribute :/ but that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted April 6, 2011 Report Share Posted April 6, 2011 Good, my Machina deck needs more love. Just a few OCG errors. • Machina Creator and Queen should be "that is removed from play" not "Removed from Play Pile" • Monster should not be capitalized. Otherwise, cool set. Want Moar. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted April 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2011 I feel really dumb, now I know why you guys think the these guys should be Earth Attribute. I was in a store and I saw the SD: Machina Mayhem, and I passed it on without much thought. I forgot that those cards existed, and I made an Archetype with the word "Machina" in it... probably a subliminal thought back there in my head. So I basically made these without knowing about the Machina cards! Oops... Updated Machina Queen to: [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/4g6zit.jpg[/IMG] Lore: Once per turn you may Special Summon one "Machina" Monster that is removed from play or from your Graveyard, except "Machina Queen" and "Machina Fortress". Monsters summoned by this effect cannot attack the turn they are summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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