+tr.Ryder Posted April 7, 2011 Report Share Posted April 7, 2011 [IMG]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/091/1/6/dead_space_2___tagnature_by_ryder19-d3czfg3.png[/IMG] Please leave me some helpful comments and criticism. I haven't tags as frequently but hopefully it is nice Thanks guys, ~Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Since nobody posted on this, i'll give it a go! I like the idea of the Red and Blue colours beside his shoulders, it really does add a nice effect to the tag. However, the effect used on his shoulder, which I think is a distortion, looks random and out of place. Maybe take that out and focus more on the effects around his shoulders instead of on them? If you use the distortion correctly, it can be used as a great effect. Try using it in different ways? Also, there isn't really any lighting going on in the tag, try and sort that out. Maybe using a white soft brush on his visor? Then use a dark soft brush around his body and set it to soft light. That could work and give the tag a little bit of extra lighting. Also, try to add a background, even if it is a dark stock, just blur it and put it in the background. That gives the tag depth. Which would really improve it! As for the borders, I wouldn't use them. You'd get a lot of stick from a lot of Tag makers if you were to post this in other places. Aside from this, you have a half decent tag going on, just try and improve where I have mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Please, it's either a tag or a sig or a signature. Do not amalgamate those. Anyways this is a pretty good tag. As Hioco mentioned a good blur would be great, but only around the orange side. At colors, some adjustments would be welcomed; a nice orange photo filter or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 The only problems I have with it is that it could be a bit more focused on the Character and it might could use some color effects. Gradient, Filter, etc.^^ Other than that, great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.ko Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 I also say blending needs some work with colors (a good gradient map does this well) and proper lighting and blurring and sharpening would make this immaculate. </3 the border, but that's just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted April 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 Okay thanks guys I'll work on that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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