Final card

[jexabu]

oped? uped? opinions please? reps for helpful comments or ocg fixes.
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lore: This face-down card cannot be destroyed. This card’s activation cannot be negated. This card can only be activated if the following requirements are met:
•You have less than 1000 life points.
•Your opponent has 3000 more life points than you.
•It is your opponent’s draw phase.
•Your opponent has more than one card on the field.
Your opponent cannot normal summon, flip summon, set, special summon, ritual summon, fusion summon, synchro summon, exceed summon, activate monster effects, activate traps, activate spells or attack as long as this card is face up on the field. Destroy this card after two of your own end phases. When this face up card is destroyed by its own effect your opponent wins the duel.

[Vough]

This face-down card cannot be destroyed. This card’s activation cannot be negated. This card can only be activated if the following requirements are met:
•You have less than 1000 life points.
•Your opponent has 3000 more life points than you.
•It is your opponent’s draw phase.
•Your opponent has more than one card on the field.
Your opponent cannot normal summon, flip summon, set, special summon, ritual summon, fusion summon, synchro summon, exceed summon, activate monster effects, activate traps, activate spells or attack as long as this card is face up on the field. Destroy this card after two of your own end phases. When this face up card is destroyed by its own effect your opponent wins the duel.

SHOULD BE:

This face-down card cannot be destroyed[OR this card cannot be destroyed, except by its own effect]. (If this card would be destroyed, reveal it to your opponent, and Set it face-down again.) This card's activation and effect cannot be negated. You can only activate this card if the following conditions are met:
*Your Life Points are 1000 or less
*Your opponent's Life Points are 3000 or higher than yours.
*It is your opponent's Draw Phase.
*Your opponent has 2 or more cards on their side of the field.
Your opponent Summon or Set, activate Spells, Traps, or Effect Monster's effects, or attack, as long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field. Destroy this card after 2 of your End Phases. When this card is destroyed by its own effect, your opponent wins the Duel.

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Don't see any point in actually having this card in your Deck for any reason at all.
Also, I don't think the artwork really...works for the card itself.

[inquistidor]

it needs to be a trap card. or else u cant...rly...activate it during ur opponents draw phase.

2 turns of ur opponent being a vegetable is more than enough time to win D:.

[jexabu]

[quote name='Vough' timestamp='1302228728' post='5122012']
This face-down card cannot be destroyed. This card’s activation cannot be negated. This card can only be activated if the following requirements are met:
•You have less than 1000 life points.
•Your opponent has 3000 more life points than you.
•It is your opponent’s draw phase.
•Your opponent has more than one card on the field.
Your opponent cannot normal summon, flip summon, set, special summon, ritual summon, fusion summon, synchro summon, exceed summon, activate monster effects, activate traps, activate spells or attack as long as this card is face up on the field. Destroy this card after two of your own end phases. When this face up card is destroyed by its own effect your opponent wins the duel.

SHOULD BE:

This face-down card cannot be destroyed[OR this card cannot be destroyed, except by its own effect]. (If this card would be destroyed, reveal it to your opponent, and Set it face-down again.) This card's activation and effect cannot be negated. You can only activate this card if the following conditions are met:
*Your Life Points are 1000 or less
*Your opponent's Life Points are 3000 or higher than yours.
*It is your opponent's Draw Phase.
*Your opponent has 2 or more cards on their side of the field.
Your opponent Summon or Set, activate Spells, Traps, or Effect Monster's effects, or attack, as long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field. Destroy this card after 2 of your End Phases. When this card is destroyed by its own effect, your opponent wins the Duel.

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Don't see any point in actually having this card in your Deck for any reason at all.
Also, I don't think the artwork really...works for the card itself.
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thanks for the ocg fixes