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Mist Valley Support


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Lore:
While this card is face-up is it also treated as a Winged Beast type monster. During your Main Phase you can select one card on the field and one card in your hand. Send the selected card back to the hand and send the selected card in your hand to the graveyard.

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Mist valley has recently gotten support from the field spell, but something really upsets me about a certain card. Mist Valley Baby Roc's effect says "When this card is sent directly from the hand to graveyard, you can special summon it" this SOUNDS really good, but its effect ha sone word in it that drives me nuts. that word is "CAN" meaning its effect does not work with certain cards like Brionac(lthe card i planned on using it with). and that is why this card is kinda like a carbon copy of it, but it allows Baby roc's effect to go off. i decided to make it a more defensive card than offensive, and for the most part, it's used like brionac, just the effect times differently. also its first effect was made primarily for Icarus Attack. Sue me. rate/comment/fix?
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Yeesh...pretty soon I'll have to develop a sort of ranking system for this stuff.

I like the card. The image is pretty neat, and the name and intentions are both good. The ATK and DEF are kind of funky...explanation? And why exactly did you specify that it's both Dragon and Winged Beast? Why not just Winged Beast, if going for Icarus Attack?

As for the effect, you could try wording it like this: "[b]Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can return 1 card on the field to its owner's hand to send one card from your hand to the Graveyard.[/b]" That allows for the Special Summon of Baby Roc and makes it much less confusing (kinda).
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its atk and def are "funky" cuz i didnt wanna make it a beat stick since, its a brionac xD, so i didnt wanna make a card that's EXACTLY like brionac, he's already broken. ty for the rewording, it is less confusing, when i first wrote it i just wanted to make sure it was as precise as possible xD. as for the type, well.. idk really, i guess i thought a mist dragon would be cool, ALSO for a reason i just thought, it allows Debris Dragon to be used :o., since baby roc has 400 atk. just tryin to support this archetype as much as possible i guess

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