EndlessOcean Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Story: In the year, 2500, Scientist have managed to make robots that can replace humans in war. After 5 years, the world boasts 5 years of peace. The robots have never been used and no one remembers them any more. Now, it is time for their revenge..... [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/610/299673.jpg[/img] Lore: If there are 2 "Mecha Robot" monsters on the field, Special Summon this card from this card, ignoring card effects. Once per turn, you can add one Equip spell card to your hand. If this card has 2 or more cards Equipped to it, Special Summon 1 "Mecha Robot Private" from your hand or deck. [img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7198/299673a.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can add one Equip spell card to your hand. If 2 or more cards are Equipped to this card, Special Summon 1 "Mecha Robot" monster from your deck with 1000 or less ATK. There cannot be 2 "Mecha Robot Coporal" on the field. [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3667/299673c.jpg[/img] Lore: If an equiped card is activated, activate the following effect: Add 1 spell card from you deck to your Hand, and discard 1 card from your Hand. [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2277/299673o.jpg[/img] Lore: This cards effect can only be activated when an equip card designating a "Mecha Robot" card as its target. Destroy one card on the opponents side of the field and draw one card. If this card is the target of a spell card, you can activate one of the following effects : Destroy this card and Sp.Summon 1 monster from you Hand, OR, Destroy the spell card designating this card and draw 1 card. [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7974/299673p.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be equiped to a "Mecha Robot" card. Increase the equiped cards ATK by 700. After 5 turns, Destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dugal Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Great OCG and concept but i don't realy like the last 2 pics no background=meh real life pic=meh 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 some capitalization problems (like spell card should be Spell Card, deck should be Deck, etc) Last picture isn't too impressive though. Cannon Ammo's effect isn't good for just 700 atk boost. 7 Complete would be superior to that 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Never use photography for card pics... The second to last pic is meh cuz of it's white background... "Mecha Robot Blaster" has an overused pic... The last card is way too powerful... lower it from 700 to like 300 or so or elaborate on the effect, for example, add an additional sacrifice in the effect to balance it out.... #1 -If there are 2 "Mecha Robot" monsters on the field, [i]Special Summon this card from this card,[/i] ignoring card effects. Once per turn, you can add [b]1[/b] Equip [b]Spell Card[/b] to your hand. If this card has 2 or more cards Equipped to it, Special Summon 1 "Mecha Robot Private" from your hand or deck. hand or deck? choose one... if you choose deck, capitalize the D and also make sure to say "Then shuffle your Deck." #2 -Once per turn, you can add one Equip [b]Spell Card[/b] to your hand. If 2 or more cards are Equipped to this card, Special Summon 1 "Mecha Robot" [s]monster[/s] from your [b]D[/b]eck with 1000 or less ATK. [b]There can only be 1 "Mecha Robot Coporal" on the field[/b] #3 -If an [b]Equip[/b] card is activated, activate the following effect: Add 1 spell card from you deck to your Hand, and discard 1 card from your [b]h[/b]and. #4 -This card[b]'[/b]s effect can only be activated when an equip card [b]is equipped to a[/b] "Mecha Robot" card [s]as its target[/s]. Destroy one card [b]in your opponent's control[/b] and draw [b]1[/b] card. If this card is [b]equipped to[/b] a [b]Spell Card[/b], you can activate one of the following effects: -Destroy this card and [b]Special[/b] Summon 1 monster from you [b]h[/b]and. -Destroy the [b]Spell Card[/b] [b]equipped to[/b] this card and draw 1 card. #5 -This card can only be [b]equipped[/b] to "Mecha Robot". Increase the [b]equipped[/b] card's ATK by 700. After 5 turns, [b]d[/b]estroy this card. [i]a[/i] = say what? [b]a[/b] = fixed [s]a[/s] = remove Final Score: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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