boomboom201 Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 hey guys, this is my first realistic card ive decided to post, so lots of feedback would be much appreciated if possible. the main thing im having issues with is getting OCG correct. [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/9053/393394.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squidward Tentacles Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 wow. Not bad for a first card. But I think you spelled defense wrong. pic's meh, i give it an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 [color="#0000FF"]OCG fix[/color] [font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=2][color="#0000FF"] While you [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Control"]control[/url] this [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Face-up"]face-up[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Defense_Position"]Defense Position[/url] card, your opponent cannot [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Select"]select[/url] another [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Monster_Cards"]monster[/url] as an [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Attack_target"]attack target[/url].[/color][/size][/font] [font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=2][color="#0000FF"] [/color][/size][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2]the effecct is kinda bland but eh...[/size][/color][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2]kewl for your 1st [/size][/color][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2] [/size][/color][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2]8/10[/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boomboom201 Posted April 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 [quote name='General Blaze' timestamp='1302455376' post='5128450'] wow. Not bad for a first card. But I think you spelled defense wrong. pic's meh, i give it an 8/10 [/quote] ok, thanks for the rating. and about the spelling of defense, my computer's spell check recognizes "defence" as the proper spelling, even though im pretty sure it can be spelt either way. i just checked my yugioh cards, and it looks like "defense" is the proper spelling for cards. thanks for bringing that up.[quote name='DISASTROUS!!' timestamp='1302456067' post='5128478'] [color="#0000FF"]OCG fix[/color] [font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=2][color="#0000FF"] While you [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Control"]control[/url] this [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Face-up"]face-up[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Defense_Position"]Defense Position[/url] card, your opponent cannot [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Select"]select[/url] another [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Monster_Cards"]monster[/url] as an [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Attack_target"]attack target[/url].[/color][/size][/font] [font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=2][color="#0000FF"] [/color][/size][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2]the effecct is kinda bland but eh...[/size][/color][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2]kewl for your 1st [/size][/color][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2] [/size][/color][/font] [font="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"][color="#0000FF"][size=2]8/10[/size][/color][/font] [/quote] ok, thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 While you control this face-up Defense Position card, your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. Word Play Loop Meaning that if he had two of them up, your opponent couldn't attack him, it would be like marauding captain lock. The way he/she had it, or similiar While you control this face-up Defense Position card, your opponent cannot declare an attack on another monster as an attack target. That gets rid of the loop in my knowledge. Still, I like the card, fix OCG and I might rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boomboom201 Posted April 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 im more of an old school guy, considering i havent really duelled or bought any new cards for years. i dont like tuners/synchro cards, and i dont really know any of the new effects that have come out with them. my newest cards are probably the spellcaster structure deck that came out years ago.[quote name='General White' timestamp='1302456826' post='5128516'] While you control this face-up Defense Position card, your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. Word Play Loop Meaning that if he had two of them up, your opponent couldn't attack him, it would be like marauding captain lock. The way he/she had it, or similiar While you control this face-up Defense Position card, your opponent cannot declare an attack on another monster as an attack target. That gets rid of the loop in my knowledge. Still, I like the card, fix OCG and I might rate. [/quote] changed it, sounds better to me aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 I know, I was just letting you know, so you can choose. Either way, I'd choose the word play loop, this one. While you control this face-up Defense Position card, your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. So no attacks can hit your LP or monsters until they use a card to get rid of them. It's balanced. So, Better Pic.... 6.87/10 Its up to you, you can choose the other guys, which is correct, but if you don't want marauding loop, then use mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boomboom201 Posted April 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 [quote name='General White' timestamp='1302457248' post='5128537'] I know, I was just letting you know, so you can choose. Either way, I'd choose the word play loop, this one. While you control this face-up Defense Position card, your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. So no attacks can hit your LP or monsters until they use a card to get rid of them. It's balanced. So, Better Pic.... 6.87/10 Its up to you, you can choose the other guys, which is correct, but if you don't want marauding loop, then use mine. [/quote] i thought you just told me to get rid of the loop? and now you say this way, im confused lol.[quote name='boomboom201' timestamp='1302457421' post='5128547'] i thought you just told me to get rid of the loop? and now you say this way, im confused lol. [/quote] oh never mind, i understand now haha. sorry, im like a hardcore noob when it comes to making cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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