Sora no Otoshimono Duel Monster Cards!

[Mazaki Anzu]

Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros:

[img]http://k80.img-up.net/SnO-EN001lnvwo.png[/img]

Lore:
This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, activate 1 of these effects:
- Select 1 Spell Card from your Deck and send it to your Graveyard.
- Select 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard and remove it from play.


Electronic Warfare Angeloid Type Beta - Nymph:

[img]http://c23.img-up.net/SnO-EN002jsvap.png[/img]

Lore:
This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. If this card attacks your opponent directly, double
its original ATK during the Damage Step only.


Close Combat Angeloid Type Delta - Astraea:

[img]http://x77.img-up.net/SnO-EN003qxfst.png[/img]

Lore:
This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. While this card is on the field, it cannot be removed from play.


Uranus Queen the Lady of the Sky:

[img]http://c61.img-up.net/SnO-EN004cpa9j.png[/img]

Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except you remove from play
1 face-up "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros" you control. This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster.
This card's name is also treated as "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros" while it is face-up on the field. This card
gains 1000 ATK for each of your "Transport Device Card" that is removed from play. Also, when this card attacks an
opposing monster it gains ATK equal to the original ATK of the attack target during the damage calculation only.


Ambush Angeloid Type Gamma - Harpy:

[img]http://h02.img-up.net/SnO-EN00592uc6.png[/img]

Lore:
This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. You can Normal Summon or Set this card without
Tributing. If you do, this card cannot inflict any Battle Damage. Your opponent can attack your Life
Points directly instead of attacking this card.


Second Generation Angeloid Type Zeta - Hiyori Kazane:

[img]http://c62.img-up.net/SnO-EN007dhtve.png[/img]

Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 5
LIGHT or DARK monsters on your side of the field.. This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster.While
being face-up, this card cannot be removed from the field. The ATK and DEF of this card cannot be reduced.
Your opponent cannot Summon another "Second Generation Angeloid Type Zeta - Hiyori Kazane". After the
Damae Step in a battle involving this card reduce the ATK of the opposing monster to 0. Each time this card
destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Angeloid Counter on it. With 5 Angeloid Counter on this card, you win
the Duel.
(This card is purposely overpowered!)


Transport Device Card:

[img]http://w69.img-up.net/SnO-EN008eke7b.png[/img]

Lore:
When this card is selected by the effect of "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros", it gains this effect:
- Until the end of this turn, switch the original ATK of 1 face-up "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros"
on your side of the field with the original ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field.


Paradise Song!

[img]http://u26.img-up.net/SnO-EN0095tof3.png[/img]

Lore:
Pay 1000 Life Points for each face-up "Electronic Warfare Angeloid Type Beta - Nymph" on the field. Return
all monsters on the field to their owners hand, except "Electronic Warfare Angeloid Type Beta - Nymph".





There are still more cards of Sora no Otoshimono like "Second Generation Angeloid Type Epsilon - Chaos" or "Underwater Combat Angeloid Type Eta - Seiren".
But I didn't feel like uploading them because I need to work on their Card Pics.


-Yeah-

[Exa Raiun]

The problem with this set is that most cards are way too situational. The effect of Ikaros can certainly help to take down a single monster and the effect of Uranus Queen can be devastating when it attacks - but when its attacked, the pathetic ATK (even if you have 1 Transport Device Card removed from play, its not spectacular, and getting more of them removed is a long task) makes her outright useless. I guess Nymph can be used in conjuction with Megamorph, but otherwise, problematic to keep on the field. Astrea is curious, a beatstick with some protection. By the way, regarding her - what would happen if Macro Cosmos is on the field, and she would be removed from the field? Would it make her indestructable? Harpy is again, an odd card - you can use her as a backup beatstick, I admit. Hiyori Kazane is overpowered indeed, but almost impossible to summon (unless you use a swarming deck (Blackwings?). Transport Device Card would definitely need a normal effect, outside the one related to Ikaros, because it would end up as a dead draw many times. Paradise Song! should have something like "The effect of this card can be activated only if you control a face-up "Electronic Warfare Angeloid Type Beta - Nymph" on the field.".

Overall, I do understand what was your direction about these cards, and I can certainly see creativity in your ideas, but unfortunately, most of them would be really hard to effectively use. For the effort, I can give a total score of 7/10.

[Mazaki Anzu]

[quote name='Exa Raiun' timestamp='1302603373' post='5132899']
The problem with this set is that most cards are way too situational. The effect of Ikaros can certainly help to take down a single monster and the effect of Uranus Queen can be devastating when it attacks - but when its attacked, the pathetic ATK (even if you have 1 Transport Device Card removed from play, its not spectacular, and getting more of them removed is a long task) makes her outright useless. I guess Nymph can be used in conjuction with Megamorph, but otherwise, problematic to keep on the field. Astrea is curious, a beatstick with some protection. By the way, regarding her - what would happen if Macro Cosmos is on the field, and she would be removed from the field? Would it make her indestructable? Harpy is again, an odd card - you can use her as a backup beatstick, I admit. Hiyori Kazane is overpowered indeed, but almost impossible to summon (unless you use a swarming deck (Blackwings?). Transport Device Card would definitely need a normal effect, outside the one related to Ikaros, because it would end up as a dead draw many times. Paradise Song! should have something like "The effect of this card can be activated only if you control a face-up "Electronic Warfare Angeloid Type Beta - Nymph" on the field.".

Overall, I do understand what was your direction about these cards, and I can certainly see creativity in your ideas, but unfortunately, most of them would be really hard to effectively use. For the effort, I can give a total score of 7/10.
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thtats the weak point of the cards they are only strong during your turn but during your opponent turn you need to protect them

[Lord Metallium]

First of all this anime is awesome can't deny it lol now the cards are good but the effect on some cards kinda looks OVERPOWERED so my opinion would be 7/10.

[Exa Raiun]

[quote name='Mazaki Anzu' timestamp='1302608014' post='5132966']
thtats the weak point of the cards they are only strong during your turn but during your opponent turn you need to protect them
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Only strong during your turn - but not strong enough to give a certain edge over the opponent. They are supposed to be glass cannon-like, if I am correct, but there is way too much glass and way too few little cannon here. Some support cards regarding their protection could probably help them - or maybe it would lead to clogged hands, I don't know. Also, I am still wondering about my question about Astraea and Macro Cosmos...

[Mazaki Anzu]

[quote name='Exa Raiun' timestamp='1302625002' post='5133228']
Only strong during your turn - but not strong enough to give a certain edge over the opponent. They are supposed to be glass cannon-like, if I am correct, but there is way too much glass and way too few little here. Some support cards regarding their protection could probably help them - or maybe it would lead to clogged hands, I don't know. Also, I am still wondering about my question about Astraea and Macro Cosmos...
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like "Miracle Jurassic Egg", Astraea will still be removed from play when Marco Cosmos is on the field because she can go to the graveyard

[darkwolf777]

[b]"Transport Device Card"[/b]

This effect is written a little weirdly:

1) You state "When this card is selected by the effect of "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros", it gains this effect:" By saying "it gains this effect" you're referring to the Ikaros that selected it, although your effect states "any Ikaros" later on.

2) If you're going to say "It gains this effect" then you are literally adding a new effect onto a monster . This is how Ikaros' effect would look like if it gained the effect of Transport Device Card":

"This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, activate 1 of these effects: - Select 1 Spell Card from your Deck and send it to your Graveyard. - Select 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard and remove it from play. Until the end of this turn, switch the original ATK of 1 face-up "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros" on your side of the field with the original ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field."

See how that added effect doesn't work well on a monster card written the way it is? The best way to repair this is to simply change the part that says "It gains this effect" part as follows:

"If this card is selected by the effect of "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros", switch the original ATK of 1 face-up "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros" on your side of the field with the original ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field, until the End Phase."

[b]Ambush Angeloid Type Gamma - Harpy:[/b]

For the "Your opponent can attack your Life Points directly instead of attacking this card", you'd want to say "This card cannot be attacked by your opponent's monsters" similar to "The Legendary Fisherman". In "The Legendary Fisherman's" case, when Umi is on the field, monsters cannot attack him at all and would attack directly if it is the only monster you control.

Your effect would seem to allow your opponent to attack you directly, even if you had other monsters on the field (so long as you didn't attack Type Gamma), so I'm not sure if you'd want that o.o

[b]Second Generation Angeloid Type Zeta - Hiyori Kazane:[/b]

Destroyed cards cannot exist on the field, so it would bypass your "This card cannot be removed from the field" effect. You'd want to add some sort of destruction immunity to this card (i.e. "This card cannot be destroyed by batte or by card effects"), unless of course you wanted it to be like this.


Of course, if there's something wrong with my interpretation on how your cards is supposed to work, that would be misinterpretation on my part i guess ;o

[Mazaki Anzu]

[quote name='darkwolf777' timestamp='1302642780' post='5133833']
[b]"Transport Device Card"[/b]

This effect is written a little weirdly:

1) You state "When this card is selected by the effect of "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros", it gains this effect:" By saying "it gains this effect" you're referring to the Ikaros that selected it, although your effect states "any Ikaros" later on.

2) If you're going to say "It gains this effect" then you are literally adding a new effect onto a monster . This is how Ikaros' effect would look like if it gained the effect of Transport Device Card":

"This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, activate 1 of these effects: - Select 1 Spell Card from your Deck and send it to your Graveyard. - Select 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard and remove it from play. Until the end of this turn, switch the original ATK of 1 face-up "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros" on your side of the field with the original ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field."

See how that added effect doesn't work well on a monster card written the way it is? The best way to repair this is to simply change the part that says "It gains this effect" part as follows:

"If this card is selected by the effect of "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros", switch the original ATK of 1 face-up "Pet-Class Angeloid Type Alpha - Ikaros" on your side of the field with the original ATK of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field, until the End Phase."

[b]Ambush Angeloid Type Gamma - Harpy:[/b]

For the "Your opponent can attack your Life Points directly instead of attacking this card", you'd want to say "This card cannot be attacked by your opponent's monsters" similar to "The Legendary Fisherman". In "The Legendary Fisherman's" case, when Umi is on the field, monsters cannot attack him at all and would attack directly if it is the only monster you control.

Your effect would seem to allow your opponent to attack you directly, even if you had other monsters on the field (so long as you didn't attack Type Gamma), so I'm not sure if you'd want that o.o

[b]Second Generation Angeloid Type Zeta - Hiyori Kazane:[/b]

Destroyed cards cannot exist on the field, so it would bypass your "This card cannot be removed from the field" effect. You'd want to add some sort of destruction immunity to this card (i.e. "This card cannot be destroyed by batte or by card effects"), unless of course you wanted it to be like this.


Of course, if there's something wrong with my interpretation on how your cards is supposed to work, that would be misinterpretation on my part i guess ;o
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First, thank you for the feedback!

to Transport Device Card: Thats a good idea! I will change that!

to Harpy: The Harpies are an Ambush Type of Angeloids so they are cowards, if they get attacked they fly away and let their Master get the hit!

to Hiyori: Yeah, I could use the "This card cannot be destroyed by batte or by card effects" but she can't return to your hand or Deck or be used for a Tribut Summon either!
So basically: Once she is summoned, you can't get rid of her! She is like a God Card or Orichalchos.

[darkwolf777]

[quote name='Mazaki Anzu' timestamp='1302692450' post='5135111']
to Hiyori: Yeah, I could use the "This card cannot be destroyed by batte or by card effects" but she can't return to your hand or Deck or be used for a Tribut Summon either!
So basically: Once she is summoned, you can't get rid of her! She is like a God Card or Orichalchos.
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Not necessarily. After adding the destruction protection to your effect, your "Hiyori" card can still be flipped face-down, such as with "Book of Moon" for example. While Face-down, her removal prevention effect is not active, so she can then be removed from the field with card effects, be Tributed, etc. She could also be negated with "Skill Drain" or "Forbidden Chalice". I guess one or two weaknesses could be ok :3

Also, after re-reading your "Gamma - Harpy", it does say your opponent "can" choose to attack directly instead of attacking this card, meaning they're still allowed to attack "Gamma - Harpy" if they wanted. "The Legendary Fisherman's" effect isn't optional like how you have your "Gamma - Harpy", as no monsters can attack "The Legendary Fisherman" when Umi is on the field. Maybe then changing the effect, instead of the way "The Legendary Fisherman" has it, change it to:

"While "Ambush Angeloid Type Gamma - Harpy" is the only monster(s) you control, your opponent's monsters can attack your Life Points directly."

[Mazaki Anzu]

[quote name='darkwolf777' timestamp='1302710739' post='5135454']
Also, after re-reading your "Gamma - Harpy", it does say your opponent "can" choose to attack directly instead of attacking this card, meaning they're still allowed to attack "Gamma - Harpy" if they wanted. "The Legendary Fisherman's" effect isn't optional like how you have your "Gamma - Harpy", as no monsters can attack "The Legendary Fisherman" when Umi is on the field. Maybe then changing the effect, instead of the way "The Legendary Fisherman" has it, change it to:

"While "Ambush Angeloid Type Gamma - Harpy" is the only monster(s) you control, your opponent's monsters can attack your Life Points directly."
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even with other monsters on the field my opponent can attack me directly..
example what would happen if this would be a Tag Force Game:
my field: "Gamma - Harpy" Attack Mode and Spirit Reaper Defense Mode
my oppoent controls a Blue Eyes White Dragon. I have 2000 LP. He enters the Battle Phase and choose my Harpy as Attack Target but then he will be asked if he wants to attack me directly instead. He selects Yes and win the Duel.

[darkwolf777]

[quote name='Mazaki Anzu' timestamp='1302714897' post='5135531']
even with other monsters on the field my opponent can attack me directly..
example what would happen if this would be a Tag Force Game:
my field: "Gamma - Harpy" Attack Mode and Spirit Reaper Defense Mode
my oppoent controls a Blue Eyes White Dragon. I have 2000 LP. He enters the Battle Phase and choose my Harpy as Attack Target but then he will be asked if he wants to attack me directly instead. He selects Yes and win the Duel.
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If they must declare an attack on Harpy first, then the following would probably work:

"When an opponent's monster attacks this card, your opponent can make the attack a direct attack."

This is similar to Astral Barrier's wording, except to work so that your opponent chooses to make it a direct attack, rather than you.

[Nightmare Moon]

Great cards, Anzu-chan Though a few OCG errors, no biggie. 7/10.