EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 The pic is from Instinctmeister so thanks but I might have a few OCG errors but that is because I didn't really kow how to word it so just tell me how to word it right and this is for my new booster I'm working on called "Rise Of The Destruction" but here it is Effect:If this card was Special Summoned, remove from play 1 card in your opponent's hand. If this card was destroyed by a monster with one of the following types activate the following effects- -Warrior: Destroy the attacking card after Damage Calculation.-Fairy: Your opponent loses 500 Life Points.-Dragon: Special Summon up to 2 Dragon-Type monsters from your Graveyard (excluding this card).-Spellcaster: You lose 1000 Life Points.-Fiend: You can remove from play 1 Trap Card in your opponent's Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 nice effect, here is how it could have been written- If this card was Special Summoned, remove from play 1 card in your opponent's hand. If this card was destroyed by a monster with one of the following types activate the following effects- -Warrior: Destroy the attacking card after Damage Calculation.-Fairy: Your opponent loses 500 Life Points.-Dragon: Special Summon up to 2 Dragon-Type monsters from your Graveyard (excluding this card).-Spellcaster: You lose 1000 Life Points.-Fiend: You can remove from play 1 Trap Card in your opponent's Graveyard. almost perfect OCG, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Thanks I worked really really hard on this card especially trying to think of an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 I really like it, the picture is really nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Thanks instinctmeister gave it to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Thanks I worked really really hard on this card especially trying to think of an effect well it's very good, one of the most original effects i say you deserve a +rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 I updated with the reworded effect Cybernetic Dragon gave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 I updated with the reworded effect Cybernetic Dragon gave glad to see you took my advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Ha I need it reworded and thank for the rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Nice card ^_^ Well done you are really improving and the rep Cybernetic Dragon gave you is well deserved. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 nice pic:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Thnks I hope my set is even better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Ha I need it reworded and thank for the rep your welcome. anyway how big will the set be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Usually they die like after 20 cards or so but I'm going try to get through 80-90 card set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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