Aero Cynofic

[Dmzi the Dark Shadow]

[b]All righty, the rules are, you have to rate it from a scale to 1 -10, I need that. Also if you would, tell me what I need to fix[/b]

[img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/4388/395659.jpg[/img]

[B]LORE:[/B]
1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
Once per turn, you may discard a card and flip a coin, if it lands on heads draw 2 cards, if it lands on tails, discard another card. If this card attacks, before damage calculation, roll a dice, if it lands on 1, 3, or 6 this card gains ATK equal to the dice roll x300.

[EndlessOcean]

OCG Fix:
1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
Once per turn, you may discard a card and flip a coin, if it lands on heads draw 2 cards, if it lands on tails, discard another card. If this card attacks, before damage calculation, roll a dice, if it lands on 1, 3, or 6 this card gains ATK equal to the dice roll X1000.

[Dmzi the Dark Shadow]

Thanks, and what would you rate it? Look at my siggy.

[EndlessOcean]

Well, Its REALLY Overpowered. Max ATK=8500.

So... No offence, 3/10.
But, this has a really unique effect, i would just make the ATK Boost lower, to something like X300. You have alot of promise, you just need to tone down your cards a little, and you could become a really good card maker.

[Dmzi the Dark Shadow]

[b]All right, Thanks, I need criticism... I fixed it... Any one else? [/b]

[Hungry Malefic Panda]

its max attack is
4300. Still, kinda op'd. 4/10.

[Dmzi the Dark Shadow]

All right, would x100 be fair?

[Northern Sage]

[quote name='Dmzi the Dark Shadow' timestamp='1302795011' post='5137630']
[b]All righty, the rules are, you have to rate it from a scale to 1 -10, I need that. Also if you would, tell me what I need to fix[/b]

[img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/4388/395659.jpg[/img]

[B]LORE:[/B]
1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
Once per turn, you [b]may[/b] discard a card and flip a coin, if it lands on heads draw 2 cards, if it lands on tails, discard another card. If this card attacks, before damage calculation, roll a dice, if it lands on 1, 3, or 6 this card gains ATK equal to the dice roll x300.
[/quote]
Always can, not may for ocg. It's an okay card, effect's considerably decent, not directly overpowered. 6/10.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='Scruffle' timestamp='1302799087' post='5137738']
its max attack is
4300. Still, kinda op'd. 4/10.
[/quote]
Not really. Luck based cards aren't very consistent, and you'd have to either be pretty luky to roll 6's constantly, or fix the dice.

[Neoshadow155]

If you read closely it seems like it "keeps it"
For example you get a 1 so it's +300
So 2800 ATK it is...but the your next turn is the same thing and you roll a 6 so 2800 + 2400.
Is this on purpose? If not add until the end of your Battle Phase or something.

[ragnarok1945]

*300 might be a bit much for the 6 result dice roll

4300 atk is a bit high given it's only lv9. I would have made it 1, 3, and 4 and that's enough in case it lands on the highest number

but that's your call

8/10

[Dmzi the Dark Shadow]

I think I will actually, thanks.