Yami_Yugi32 Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 After my return to the website, I have completed my first set of cards. Now, without further a due, here it is. [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/5424/69553e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/9083/69553gu.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/7972/69553c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/5686/69553f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/2875/69553.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3368/69553b.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami_Yugi32 Posted April 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 Added new card, "Father's Best Friend". Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRobloxian Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Some pictures scared me for life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash hero Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 can some one give me instruction on how to post cards on a forum???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HauntedShadow Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [quote name='Flash hero' timestamp='1303092977' post='5147246'] can some one give me instruction on how to post cards on a forum???? [/quote] wrong section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richbonner93 Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Good idea, but need OCG work (look @ real cards for guidelines). The field cards are WAY OPed. Other than that, really good images. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami_Yugi32 Posted April 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Rich, do you have any suggestions to fix it? Clause, which pics specifically? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richbonner93 Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 [quote name='Yami_Yugi32' timestamp='1303277619' post='5153618'] Rich, do you have any suggestions to fix it? Clause, which pics specifically? [/quote] For the Field Spells (Absolute Darkness for this effect), I would decrease there power up by like 600 or so and add an effect like: -"If a DARK monster you control is destroyed by battle, you may pay 800 life points to destroy the monster that destroyed that card." The other one, I would still decrease its power up by at least 600 for ATK and DEF and the other effect should be: -"If control a face-up DARK monster and your opponent does not, select 1 card on the field and destroy it during your End Phase". For OCG, look at some real cards. I can help with Darkus Killer. His effect should read as: "If this card is tributed to Tribute Summon 'Dark Father', increase the ATK of 'Dark Father' by half the ATK points of this card." Most of your errors are just like many others on this server... Capitalization. Like I said, just look at some cards for help and if not, email me and I'll help out as much as I can. Oh, I love the pic for Darkus Killer ( that's why I wanted to fix his effect). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami_Yugi32 Posted April 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Thanks for the suggestions Rich. I edited the posts with my updated card effects. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richbonner93 Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 [quote name='Yami_Yugi32' timestamp='1303405221' post='5156979'] Thanks for the suggestions Rich. I edited the posts with my updated card effects. Enjoy! [/quote] I forgot to mention this, but for Hell's Pawn, instead of it saying "...on the field at the same time", it would the OCG better is you had it changed to "If you control Hell's Death Hound, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by (insert amount here)". Other than that, thancks for taing my advice and don't forget to fix the Capitalization errors (ex. [b]S[/b]ummon instead of [b]s[/b]ummon) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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