Pokebeast Set [Pokemon 5/???]

[iShaun]

These are my Pokebeast Pokemon cards. Please rate them and please correct my OCG because im not very good at it. Well here they are:

[center][spoiler=Pokebeast - Pikachu][img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/1324/390647.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, add 1 "Poke Counter" to this card (max 5). This card gains 200 ATK for each "Poke Counter" on this card. You can tribute this card with 5 "Poke Counters" to Special Summon 1 "Pokebeast - Raichu" from your hand or Deck. [/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Pokebeast - Raichu][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5222/390647b.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Effect]If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Pokebeast - Pikachu", place 2 "Poke Counters" on this card. Once per turn, you place 1 "Poke Counter" on a "Pokebeast" monster you control. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Poke Counter" on the field. [/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Articuno - Pokebeast of Ice][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/8190/390647x.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 "Pokebeast" monsters from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of your opponents Spell or Trap cards. [/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Zapdos - Pokebeast of Thunder][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8400/390647i.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 "Pokebeast" monsters from your Graveyard. This cannot cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is selected as an attack target, toss a coin and call heads or tails. If you call it right, negate the attack. [/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Moltres - Pokebeast of Fire][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/1324/390647.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 "Pokebeast" monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on the field and inflict 500 damage to that cards owner. [/spoiler][/spoiler]
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[darkwolf777]

[b]Pkebeast - Pikachu[/b]

* You'll want to add "when" you add this Poke Counter. For example "During your Standby Phase, place 1 Poke Counter on this card."

[b]Pkebeast - Raichu[/b]

* Missing "can" in the effect "Once per turn, you [b]can[/b] place 1 Poke Counter on a "Pokebeast" monster you control."


Raichu is overpowered, considering not only does it start at 2600 with 1 Tribute, it can give itself (or another monster) a counter, giving it 2900 ATK right away, which is very strong for a 1 Tribute monster.

[Myst]

Interesting set..

Pikachu:

tribute -> Tribute
add -> place

Moltres:

cards -> card's

Aside from that, Moltres' picture are bad and a couple of cards are OP'D or UP'D. 8.5/10 to you!

[iShaun]

Thanks for the advice, ill sort them out when i can