banjo&kazooie Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 these are my first cards i've posted please rate,comment and if there are any ocg errors please help me fix them. here are the cards. [Spoiler=Normal monsters] barrel cat warrior cowboy gunslinger glowbo gruntydactyl jinjo mallet rat piratic sailor pterodactylus stego rammer turtle jr ugg hitter wasp of death yeti [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Effect monsters] bone headed shaman book of cheatss cheeky polar bear chomper dinosaur crystilline s'hard drill sergeant mole egg caring pterodactyl electric eel enchanted shovel evil beehive eyeball plant of defence fat polar bear flat whacker ghostly spec eyed mole giant bright headed dim witted angler giant welding torch green super fly guardian of the hero heated hand life stealer heated hand inflatable deflatable rubber dinosaur ink octopus king of jinjos magic note magic note ultima mayahem temples dizzy arrow od mecha headed shaman mecha headed shaman full form minjo moai dart idol naughty polar bear parental turtle puffer fish inflater sea mine slotty snapper dragon spec eyed mole stasher safe stomponadon,king of the stomping plains super fat polar bear super seaweed mass tank turtle the bear hero the breegull hero the forgotten fish the gargoyle sniper the goldfish hero the revived witch villain the shape shifting witch the train boilers monarch the witch villain tintop defender tnt barrel toxic barrel troll minion [ zombie jinjo king [/spoiler] [Spoiler=ritual monsters+ritual spell cards] fire serpent fire serpent volcano ice serpent ice serpent volcano jigsaw king heroes in need [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Fusion monsters] Fusion monsters: Heroes unite the baby t-rex hero the bee hero the bomb hero the dragon hero lore:the breegull hero + glowbo +the shape shifting witch this cards name is treated as the breegull hero. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your "the bear hero" as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this cards effect this cards name is treated as two egg equip spell cards in the graveyard and gains there effects.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) the snowball hero the stony hero the submarine hero the t-rex hero the van hero the washing machine hero [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Spell cards] burning valley cheat page clockwork eggs cloud cuckooland dark industries of mass faulty production davy jones town deadly theme park feeble eggs fire eggs flight feathers game enhancer glitter gulch mine hailfire peaks healing honey ice eggs ice rock jigsaw power land of dinosaurs land of the dragundas lava rock mayahem temple mega glowbo mega witch drill poison cloud small arena speeder shoes spring jump shoes spring shock pad spy camera stomping plains needs it's king suction cup shoes the magic transformation pool the travelling train wader boots warp pad wonder feathers [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Trap cards] flight pad healing honey is back split pad turtle choir wasp of death super counterattack [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banjo&kazooie Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 how do you bump a topic if this it bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banjo&kazooie Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 can someone leave a review so i can make these better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▼AlcaNdeR▼ Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Dude use spoilers please! If you don't know the code: [code][Spoiler='add a name here']Use this so you can organize your post.[/spoiler][/code] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banjo&kazooie Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigdrummerboi13 Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 Okay I have good things and bad things to say. I'm just trying to help out. So, first of all put the cards in spoilers. If you don't know how to there should be a tutorial on them. It just keeps things more organized. I am however impressed on the amount of cards you made here. Nice effort on creating this set. There are some OCG errors but can be fixed easily. The first is capitalizing letters. Every significant word in a card name should be capitalized(Ex: Fire Serpent). Also the beginning word of each card effect or description is capitalized. Monster types like Beast, Plant, or Insect get capitalized too. I noticed one card specifically([color=#ff0000]E[/color]vil [color=#ff0000]B[/color]eehive), that should say "[color=#ff0000]A[/color]ll [color=#ff0000]B[/color]east, [color=#ff0000]P[/color]lant, and [color=#ff0000]I[/color]nsect [color=#ff0000]T[/color]ype monsters gain 500 [color=#ff0000]ATK [/color]and lose 500 [color=#ff0000]DEF[/color]." All of the red just points out little errors. These cards are nice but could be great with these fixes. And as far as pictures they are probably on the lower end of the scale, but I know good pics can be hard to come by. I love the commitment and I hope to see this cards soon with little error! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 Yeah, use spoilers. And I don't give half a crap about the OCG errors here; this is probably my favorite set anyone has ever posted in Pop Culture. +Rep to you, good sir. Banjo Kazooie was my childhood game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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