Grave Warlord Of Flames

[lagry]

[img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/4449/210867d.jpg[/img]
Lore:
1Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
Once during each of your turns, when your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card, you can negate the activation and destroy that card. During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, you can inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card they control. Each time your opponent Sets a Monster Card, inflict 300 damage to your opponent.

OCG fixes?

[ss2phil]

Way too op'ed !

Your monster shouldn't be stronger than stardust or red demon at this level

[lagry]

[quote name='ss2phil' timestamp='1302898159' post='5140776']
Way too op'ed !

Your monster shouldn't be stronger than stardust or red demon at this level
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thx for the comment soo, wat do you suggest :s ?

[·Toot]

OCG Correction

1 Tuner + 1 or more non Tuner monsters
During your turn, if your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you can negate that card and destroy it. During your opponent's Standby Phase, inflict damage to your opponent for each card they control x300. Inflict 300 damage to your opponent each time he/she Sets a monster.

I think that OCG is correct
the pic is ehish
this card is way Op'ed
you might want to raise the level a bit since its kinda strong
you should focus it around one of its effects, probably the one when you deal damage for the set monster
so until then
i rate with a 7/10

[♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫]

Some suggestions here:
Increase the Level or try upping the summoning conditions. Say instead of using just two monsters you use three or four. That would make this card an extreme liability if its summoning is negated but if you do manage to get it out it will be a very powerful card otherwise its extremely OP'ed.

BTW you should try and diversify your names without things doing with the Grave since neither the picture nor the effect have anything to do with your Graveyard. Your concept doesn't match.

Rate ~ 4/10 work on your naming and try to fit the effect into that name.