Enma Kozato Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 the spanish the rain guardian uses is a bit unrealistiv "Take this Friend!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Enma Kozato' timestamp='1316395618' post='5525000'] the spanish the rain guardian uses is a bit unrealistiv "Take this Friend!" [/quote] ...Is that the only comment you have? O.o And in spanish, amigo is used for a lot of things And he obviously doesn't consider the dude that stabbed his stomach a friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 just an observation. I'm still compiling my thoughts on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 xD Okay =3 I shall await them >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 So what I have to assume is the new Arcobaleno is some sort of a female Fong and is most likely the storm arcobaleno. Also is this new person a guardian?Seeing as he is stronger than Rafael I would also assume he would take the position of a cloud guardian, seeing as he fights to protect a place he loves, similar to Hibari. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Enma Kozato' timestamp='1316400101' post='5525238'] So what I have to assume is the new Arcobaleno is some sort of a female Fong and is most likely the storm arcobaleno. [b]Admittedly, I can see where you're coming from with the Fong thing. But...why Storm? O.o[/b] Also is this new person a guardian? [b]We'll see :3[/b] Seeing as he is stronger than Rafael I would also assume he would take the position of a cloud guardian, seeing as he fights to protect a place he loves, similar to Hibari. [b]Good assessment. I wonder..hmm... :33[/b] Good job. [b]ty[/b] [/quote] :'DD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Because Fong was the storm arcobaleno... And seeing as both Fong and the new arcobaleno had long black hair Fong wore a Gi and whoever(forgot name) wears a kimono Also her eyes were red were they not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Enma Kozato' timestamp='1316403475' post='5525398'] Because Fong was the storm arcobaleno... And seeing as both Fong and the new arcobaleno had long black hair Fong wore a Gi and whoever(forgot name) wears a kimono Also her eyes were red were they not? [/quote] ....you've got a good point O: And I suppose it's not impossible for Luna to be the storm. But we'll just see Heck, haven't you guys wondered why they don't carry pacifiers? O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Because the trinisette was either abolished or the hell gates have something to do with it I figured because of the recent chapters in KHR the pacifiers are destroyed eventually It just hit me that like two-three people read this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Enma Kozato' timestamp='1316411778' post='5525602'] Because the trinisette was either abolished or the hell gates have something to do with it I figured because of the recent chapters in KHR the pacifiers are destroyed eventually It just hit me that like two-three people read this [/quote] ..yep =p How many ppl did you think read it? XD And I think they'll be destroyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 BUMP Our next chapter is slowly getting there....^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 [color=#0000cd]What a surprise. But DL better be getting other things done first.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 He will, Desu, he will....^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 This actually ain't bad, compared to my Fic, which I've started not long ago, for the first time since 2008-2009... I'll be thinking about reviewing this soon, to follow up this feedback. Keep up the good work, CS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 Thank you Dark, glad you enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 Hehe! Looking forward to Chapter 9, nowadays... But... Oh hell, better get working on my fic, before anyone starts posting their Foe Fiction! *clicks out of this thread and checks his L.O.N.E Fiction* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 BUMP Sorry, about not posting. Chapter 9 is kinda on hold for a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 BUMP Again, we're working hard on it...just getting distracted by other things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted November 1, 2011 Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 [color=#0000cd]I actually copmpletely forgot about this until today. :/[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 Oh thanks Desu...jk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 [color=#0000cd]Is this dead yet? :/[/color] [color=#0000cd]It's been like 2 weeks so I don't believe this is a necrobump but my god man.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 I will write When I find inspiration That is my genius >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 Desu please be patient. Me and DL(mainly DL) have a lot of things on our plates...we're doing the best we can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 Being patient is all we can do, I'm afraid... I've been waiting for almost a month and still waiting... It could worth the wait, eventually, if CS and DL finishes with Chapter 9, hopefully... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted November 17, 2011 Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 The Fic is in need of another guardian introduction. We need a storm and a sun for significant immediate plot developement Cloud and Mist for more subtle or delayed developments And lightning for filler. That is if DLs following KHRs style of character developement. It's a solid style too, and Link, you may not know it, but it's a style you usually lean towards in the works I've read by you. Take a group of characters and make them immediate, and leave some others to linger and develop. That's what I see in your writing anyways. /ADD influenced literary critique and reccomendations Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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