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I like your concept, but the execution is so poor. Mainly just the quality of the image and lack of interesting parts of the piece. You have an ugly monotone going on, and the random white spots don't go. I'd suggest working with a more interesting scan, or possibly coloring and rearranging the different captions and making it less thrown together.
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Hmm, the piece seems a little simple, it may not be, it just seems that way.

However I see the concept, but as mentioned you do not execute it in the right way, try to use scans of a higher quality.

Also, monotone!.. Just experiment with different colours and you'll be fine!

Great work though. I love looking at "Scan Sigs".. Tried one myself a while ago. Not bad haha.

Anyways keep it up! I do like the idea, you just need to work a little more on executing it! :)

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