michael moniz Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Here are mys first set of 21 cards, you dont have to look at them all but please look at as many as you can; tell which are good and which are bad with good feedback on how to improve them all. I spent some time attempting to find decent images for the cards,but some i could find one for,if you have any good images, post their lniks or something like that, really appreciate it. Also rate my card- making skills out of 10, thanks!: Note: Most cards are not in relevance to each other. [img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/7923/370257d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/9922/370257e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/11/370257.jpg[/img] [img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5476/370257q.jpg[/img] Thanks for looking at these cards, feedback please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mlaxeson Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Dark Asylum has an awesome effect and I'd include it in my deck just for the extra Spell Counters, never mind the damage! But you need to work or your images and OCG. There aren't many grammatical errors that I can see. But things like: Special Summon Ritual Summon Normal Summon Sent Removed Field Player Play Graveyard Hand Deck Standby Phase Life Points ^^all these things need capital letters as their names and/or instructions. you don't need to write "Dark-type" on "Dark Asylum"'s OCG, instead write just write 'DARK' Also, you should always post the lore underneath the card, even if it is legible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael moniz Posted April 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Ok, Thanks for the advice!ill take ir on board when i make my next set of cards, which this time will link in together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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