Legokun Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 [center][color="#8B0000"][b][size="5"]Welcome one, welcome all to the place of madness.[/size][/b][/color][/center] After having the urge to make some cards, I stumbled apon these pictures in Father Wolf's archive. So, um, yeah. Here are the cards I have done, I plan to keep this small, but if everybody wants it I will make it full-sized. Enjoy. [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=EN000 - Entity of Untold Destruction] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/8440/54624s.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 DARK monsters from your hand, and paying 4000 Life Points. Your opponent must select this card as an attack target, regardless of other card's effects. This card cannot be removed from the field except by it's own effect. During Damage Calculations only, increase this card's ATK equal to the monster with this highest ATK on the field. Once per turn, you can discard 3 cards. Destroy all monsters you and your opponent controls that's ATK is under 1500 (Excluding this card). If you control 5 DARK monsters (Including this card), you can remove from play all cards on your field to Special Summon "Deity of Forlorn Chaos" from your hand in Face-up Defense Position.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN001 - Deity of Forlorn Chaos] [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2503/54624.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Entity of Untold Destruction" or by it's own effect. Once per turn, you can remove this card from play. If you do, Special Summon 2 level 5 or lower Fiend-type monsters from your deck. After 5 turns, Special Summon this card to your field. When this card attacks, roll 3 dice. If the result is 18, this card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks a Face-down Defense Position monster, inflict Piercing Damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon this card from your graveyard or remove this card from play to Special Summon "Overlord of Nevertold End" from your deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN002 - Overlord of Nevertold End] [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/2503/54624.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Deity of Forlorn Chaos", or by it's own effect. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 2 cards. If you do, select 1 card from your opponent's hand, and remove it from play. Your opponent must select this card as an attack target. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is removed from the field, Special Summon this card to your field in Face-up Defense Position at the end of the turn. If you control this card, you cannot lose the duel. If an attack were to inflict damage that would reduce the owner of this card's Life Points to 0, you can remove the attacking card from play. Once per turn, you can remove this card from play. If "Entity of Untold Destruction", "Deity of Forlorn Chaos", and this card are removed from play, you can Special Summon "Being of Un-Divine Origin" from your deck in Face-down Defense Position.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN003 - Being of Un-Divine Origin] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/2286/54624x.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Overlord of Nevertold End". This card cannot be removed from the field. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 3 Level 2 or lower Normal Monsters from your hand. If you do, you can decrease this card's ATK by any amount, increase the ATK and DEF of the Special Summoned monsters equal to half the amount. At the end of the 3rd turn after this card's effect was activated, remove the Special Summoned cards from play.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN004 - Twilight Sorcerer] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4651/54624d.jpg[/img] This card is also treated as DARK. This card is also treated as a Fiend-type monster. If this card is attacked in Face-down Defense Position, destroy the attacking monster without applying Damage Calculation.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN005 - Undead Piper] [img]http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/4050/54624n.jpg[/img] If this card is attacked, destroy the attacking monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN006 - Mechanical Demon] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/5149/54624r.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card from your hand, if you do you must roll 3 dice. If the sum is 18, Special Summon this card normally. If not, remove this card from play.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler=Spells And Traps] None yet for now, Fufufu... [/spoiler] [spoiler=Credits] These cards are in no way associated with Konami nor any other form of official form of Yu-Gi-Oh! media, and were made in pure boredom by some random 13 year old. Images are from Father Wolf's Image Archive. ©ZPig Industries 2011-2011 Happy you legal freaks? [/spoiler] Rate, Hate, OCG, whatever, go nuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Bump? Comments are appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [quote name='ZombiePigman' timestamp='1303073433' post='5146442'] [center][color="#8B0000"][b][size="5"]Welcome one, welcome all to the place of madness.[/size][/b][/color][/center] After having the urge to make some cards, I stumbled apon these pictures in Father Wolf's archive. So, um, yeah. Here are the cards I have done, I plan to keep this small, but if everybody wants it I will make it full-sized. Enjoy. [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=EN000 - Entity of Untold Destruction] [img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/2503/54624.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 DARK monsters from your hand, and paying 4000 Life Points. Your opponent must select this card as an attack target, regardless of other card's effects. This card cannot be removed from the field except by it's own effect. During Damage Calculations only, increase this card's ATK equal to the monster with this highest ATK on the field. Once per turn, you can discard 3 cards. Destroy all monsters you and your opponent controls that's ATK is under 1500 (Excluding this card). If you control 5 DARK monsters (Including this card), you can remove from play all cards on your field to Special Summon "Deity of Overtold Chaos" from your hand in Face-up Defense Position.[/spoiler] [spoiler=EN001 - Deity of Overtold Chaos] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2503/54624.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Entity of Untold Destruction" or by it's own effect. [b]Once per turn, you can remove this card from play.[/b] [b]If you do, Special Summon 3 Fiend-type monsters from your deck. After 5 turns, Special Summon this card to your field[/b]. When this card attacks, roll 3 dice. If the result is 18, this card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks a Face-down Defense Position monster, inflict Piercing Damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon this card from your graveyard or remove this card from play to Special Summon "Overlord of Nevertold End" from your deck.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells And Traps] None yet for now, Fufufu... [/spoiler] [spoiler=Credits] These cards are in no way associated with Konami nor any other form of official form of Yu-Gi-Oh! media, and were made in pure boredom by some random 13 year old. Images are from Father Wolf's Image Archive. ©ZPig Industries 2011-2011 Happy you legal freaks? [/spoiler] Rate, Hate, OCG, whatever, go nuts. [/quote] Okay, overtold isn't a word, and I quite frankly think that it sounds stupid. Untold and nevertold are okay. No ocg errors as I can see, cards look fairly balanced. However, there's one effect that bothers me (the bolded one). It's practically a free high level swarm, meaning that it can easily become OTK support.Thus, after 5 turns, which can be overcome by the likes of SORL and the likes, you have 4 powerful DARK monsters on your side of the field. AND with Metalsilver armour, Taunt and Dark Door... Okay, I'm making this way too situational. Now if you make that third card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Working on it, and yes, Overtold isn't a word, but would you rather it's name be "Deity of Being Mentioned Far Too Much in Mythology Chaos"? Probably not. But if you can provide a better name, I'll use it. And re-reading the effects, yeah, it's a bit broken, I'll fix it when I make Nevertold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [quote name='ZombiePigman' timestamp='1303152288' post='5149005'] Working on it, and yes, Overtold isn't a word, but would you rather it's name be "Deity of Being Mentioned Far Too Much in Mythology Chaos"? Probably not. But if you can provide a better name, I'll use it. And re-reading the effects, yeah, it's a bit broken, I'll fix it when I make Nevertold. [/quote] It's not the word itself that bugs me, it's the essential meaning. The thing is, Yugioh cards tend to have either very dramatic or very stupid names this side of being cliché (see Blue eyes White Dragon, a card that played a major role in the first episode of the series, and an even larger role in the manga, yet has a name that makes Cloud'nCandy seem interesting). Overtold ridicules itself, and doesn't make the card any more threatening or interesting, and essentially makes it lose any appeal to the viewer, as it's own adjective makes it boring. However conspicuous this might sound, I would change it to something like forlorn, or anything else in that style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 You have a good point. Name changed to Forlorn, thanks. UPDATE: 2 New Cards Deity of Forlorn Chaos' effect made more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Come on, I need feedback. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 UPDATE: 3 New Cards. Alsobump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted April 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 OK, I have had it. This shall be MY LAST BUMP. If I do not get at least 1 comment, I'll just shut it down. Happy, cold, bleak land of new idiots that can't even post cards, happy!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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