RikuDrakeYven Posted April 17, 2011 Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 [img][img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6839/398183.jpg[/img][/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DREADuno Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Its a cool idea. There are a lot of grammar problems in the card, not to mention OCG issues (Not that good at it myself). One more thing. I think you linked it wrong. I had to copy and paste in my web browser to even see your card, so you might think of re-posting it so ppl can see the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiralMonkey17 Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Sorry but I think this would go into the Pop Culture section since this is from a video game Well I think MK stands for Mortal Kombat anyways. Also to post your card you click your card and a code will pop up beneath it. C/P the code onto the thread. Right now I can't see your card even if i use the link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RikuDrakeYven Posted May 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 I'm not really new to this place i just haven't been on here for so long but thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 Indead the grammar is very bad, also you forget most of the capital letters and the punctuations (I'm no good at punctuations either, but I do use them) Try to change the effect to something like: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 face-up "Sub Zero" monster from your side of the field to the graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each WATER "Sub Zero" monster in your graveyard. I hope this helps. Ps. This card is OP, because of its high ATK, its possibility to special summon itself and its possibility to raise its ATK even more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RikuDrakeYven Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Ok will do and thanks so much for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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