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[M.B X] [700th Post Celebration] - Mini Set - New Archetype: Metrax! [8/?] - Current Status: Unfinished

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[center][center][size=2]~[b]M.B X[/b]~

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Hello and Welcome. This is my latest creation, it is currently unfinished. I do hope to see some good feedback to improve these cards in anyway possible. And I will be adding cards to this Set from time to time, so keep checking frequently so you do not miss any updates. Thank you for viewing and please do not forget to leave your opinions on this Set. Now, about this Set... It is not based of anything, it is totally unique IMO, the name for example is somewhat a pun.. It is a combination of the words "Metroid" and "Matrix" I just tweaked it a bit. Also, as for the monster names they are all Greek no exception unless stated other wise, sorry am not translating them here(mostly because I forgot lolz!).

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Very nice pictures. 8/10
[b]Thanks. But next time please explain why you like them.
And also, why 8/10?? Why not 9 OR 10/10?![/b]
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...uhmm, about the names...it's cool that you chose to use Greek words, but you could have made a better choice...I mean, some of them are really simple or unfitting, or even ridiculus...
[b]I know but I really took my time and chose them carefully, the only 2 names that I am not satisfied with are Didymo & Epipleon.[/b]
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Well I personally like these cards some of the effects or meh though.
[b]Thank you, the Metrax monsters rely on each others abilities to send to grave and revive from grave when sent to grave.[/b]
But I agree with Satos the names could really use some work.
[b]>.<[/b]
I love the pictures.
[b]Thanks ^^[/b]
Are you taking requests and can I use the pictures for your two Masters.
[b]1. No!
2. Maybe. PM me, ok?[/b]
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[b][size="5"]Bumpz![/size][/b]
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Eh. v.v Well, very nice pictures, at least, although some I don't like the backgrounds, but in terms of the people and monster looks, awesome. However, like said previously, the effects are really boring. Except for Papoutsion, you excelled with him. :3 However...just bleh. Your archetype has no originality to it. Might as well slap on "Six Sams," "Naturia," or any other archetype name, and it wouldn't change a thing, really.

Oh, and I see a lot of people are posting about the names (I like them, personally, but meh.). I don't know if you use this site already, but the site that helps me is www.behindthename.com. They also don't just have Greek, they have a lot of different cultural names.

Anyways, really great try, but in my mind, there's a lot to be desired for with the effects. The recycling is really nice, and I really like how you return 3 to the deck, but you don't give a lot of your own twist to it. You just make it seem like every other archetype being released currently.

Images: 8/10

Names (Personally): 7/10

Effects: 1/10

Papoutsion: 8/10

XD Yes, I like Papoutsion so much, he's separate from the group. Seriously, don't change him, I like him a lot.
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