Nazryl Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 [center]I made the Virtuous cards as my first set here on YCM and although they were decent enough, they didn't mix very well together and were below the standards for realistic cards, so I'm re-making them with remastered effects and art. I wanted each picture to have a unified spot of red within them, this helps to tie the whole set together and makes them look unified. And comments and rates are welcomed and I will give +rep for something other than 'Cool' [i]The Necromancer, Zenbrian led his forces across the whole of Teal and covered it in a shadow, tormented by the animated corpses that once fought to defend her. With the six schools conquored and each of their prized Dragons bent to his will, the land was doomed to fall. Survivors from all across the land began to gather together, ready to push a last assault on the necromancer in a desperate attempt to break the hold he had created over the undead. From this patch work army, several individuals rose up to take charge and lead the broken forces against their enemy, and called themselves the Virtuous Order. Individually, they were nothing more than a warrior destined for death but each took strength from another and it was with this strength of justic and unity that the army marched forth, ready to die for their beloved land.[/i] [spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/3564/315901r.jpg[/img] You can only Normal Summon this card by sending 1 level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monster from your deck to the graveyard. [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/337/315901.jpg[/img] During your End Phase, reveal the top 5 cards of your deck. Send any revealed level 3 or lower 'Virtous Order' monsters to the graveyard, shuffle the rest back into your deck. If 2 cards with the same name were sent to the graveyard with this cards effect, double this cards ATK until the End Phase of your opponents next turn. *NEW* [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4245/315901s.jpg[/img] This card can not be Special Summoned. You can only Tribute Summon this card using a 'Virtuous Order' Monster. Decrease the ATK of this card by the combined ATK of all Level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' Monster in your Graveyard. During your Main Phase, if this card has 1000 or less ATK you can tribute it to destroy 2 cards on the field. [i]The high ATK of this card may look very over powered but I assure you, it isn't! With the whole deck sending level 3 and lower cards, it's ATK will very rarely be 2700 and it's summoning conditions mean that it can not be splashed in other decks that don't use VO monsters[/i] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/337/315901.jpg[/img] This card gains DEF equal to the combined DEF of all level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monsters in your graveyard. [i]I'm going to lower the DEF of this card to 1000. I have realized that at 1900, with another in your graveyard its DEF will be 3800.[/i] [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/337/315901.jpg[/img] This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of all level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monsters in your graveyard. One per turn, you can return 1 level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monster from your graveyard to your deck to return 1 Monster your opponent controls to their hand. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/337/315901.jpg[/img] This cards level is equal to the number of level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Oder' monsters in your graveyard. Once per turn, you can send 1 level 3 or Lower 'Virtuous Order' monster from your deck to the graveyard. [img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/337/315901.jpg[/img] This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of all Level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' Monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, select 1 Level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monster in your Graveayard and add 1 card with the same name from your deck, to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro Monsters] [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/337/315901.jpg[/img] 1 'Virtuous Order' Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner 'Virtuous Order' monsters. When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can select up to 3 level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monsters in your deck and send them to the graveyard. When this card is destroyed, you may Special Summon 1 level 3 or Lower Non-Tuner 'Virtuous Order' monster from your graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/337/315901.jpg[/img] Select and activate one of the follwing effects: *Discard 1 level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monster from your hand. Draw 2 cards. *Discard 1 Level 4 or higher Virtuous Order monster and select 1 level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monster in your deck and send it to the graveyard. [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/1914/315901o.jpg[/img] Select 1 level 4 or higher 'Virtuous Order' monster in your graveyard. Increase the ATK of 1 level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monster by the ATK of the selected monster until the End Phase. [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/337/315901.jpg[/img] During your Draw Phase, if you draw a 'Virtuous Order' Monster, you can show it to your opponent and Special Summon it. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/337/315901.jpg[/img] When your opponent Summons a Monster, return 2 Level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Order' monsters from your graveyard to your deck to negate the Summon and return the monster to the top of the deck. Your opponents deck is then shuffled. [/spoiler] The set still has more cards to come and they will be posted after a few comments on these cards [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Comments? suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Nazryl Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 First two spell cards added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 OCG Review: Graveyard, Deck, Level, and "Virtous Order". This Set is pretty original IMO, But make balanced in calculating the probability ATK of your monster and rechecked it would be wise ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Yeah, I've still got to make some of the cards that will put monsters back into the deck, so hopefully that will even out the gain that the monsters get, if not I will revise all of the cards once they have been posted, still many more to go. Thanks for the comment Maha, +rep to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 no i will give ultimate review, =) Iromu >> I personally love this card among those cards, milling Level 3 or lower monster is now rare to see and way to awesome with some Meta. Andrel>> i think ATK 1500 to be doubled is too OPed, maybe make it 1200. so it has a risk for to be remains on the field, Daimon>> yeah you should lowered its DEF, another is fine and its rather original Miku>> this monster dont deserve Level 2, change it to level 4. so it cannot works with Daimon or Iromu. or maybe you can keep it that way to maximize its usability. This card's effects is the most original compared between another cards. so keep it that way the last>> maybe make it to this " This cards level is equal to the number of level 3 or lower 'Virtuous Oder' monsters in your graveyard. Once per turn, you can send 1 level 3 or Lower 'Virtuous Order' monster from your deck to the graveyard. add some drawback while activating its effect. like discard a card, this way in order to make it balanced and then maybe you can discard Level 3 or lower "Virtous Order" monster too,^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 I don't think Andrel is OP. It's just luck.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Oh, just luck?? and for Alex, you should take a look of our clubs if you intended to and not busy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Yeah. Mainly just luck. I'm going to bright angels club in a min. It wasn't running properly without you active. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 About Bright Angels this is going off-topic, so i would write on your profile. Oh i see,, its my mistake. Andrel is pure luck, and just a 100% luck would can activate its effect. my mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Thanks again for the comments Maha, I'll take everything you said into consideration when I revise these cards. Was really helpful. More cards coming tomorrow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 no problems, we have to help all member here. because Im one of the YCM Bright Angels.. (it is a Club BTW) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Indeed we do, no one would get better at card making if we didn't! And I had no idea there were clubs on YCM... how odd lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Just click on my sigs, or come in to General Forum. Its cool there.. Yeah, you seems low-profiled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 And updated with a few new Monsters, a new Spell and the sets first Trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Unknown- Posted April 25, 2011 Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 This cards seem to be great with no OCG errors and I like their effects. Great set I will say, for this, you receive a 10/10. I see nothing wrong with anything so I'm sorry I can't give you a thorough review but the pictures are only a bit funny looking to me, but that don't make the card anyways. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 Thanks. I'm trying to look for more unified pictures, but until I get a spare few hours to troll through the internet, they'll do lol. Thanks for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Unknown- Posted April 25, 2011 Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 Alright well hope you find some because it is quite difficult looking for decent pictures you want for your certain card, and no problem man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheTradingCardMaster Posted April 25, 2011 Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 good cards, but how do you hide them so says click to show/hide? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted April 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 [s p o i l e r=(Name here)] and then [/s p o i l e r] But have no gaps between the letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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