moatcastle Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 all artwork recognition goes to jazinkay on photobucket [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/1628/392081v.jpg[/img][img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/6596/392081u.jpg[/img][img]http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6775/392081b.jpg[/img][img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/1194/392081m.jpg[/img][img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1194/392081m.jpg[/img][img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/4748/392081j.jpg[/img][img]http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/9008/392081.jpg[/img][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/3217/392081hm.jpg[/img] then there's this one...could be op [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5508/392081f.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceydude168 Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 These look great for first time cards! However, you need a bit of work on OCG. Capitalize "Normal Summoned" and "Special Summoned", "Attack Position" (not attack mode), "Card", ect. Also, "The Warrior" is a little bit overpowered. "The Messenger" is also WAY overpowered. Slap a Mist Body on it and you win the game. You may want to reword the effect to be "The controller takes no battle damage involving this Card" or something like that (OCG is flawed here). "Animal Forest" is looking pretty good, but consider changing one "Wild" counter to two. "The Ruler" is also overpowered. The effect is OK, but you need to make it have a harder summon to balance the powerful effect. You may also want to check your grammar, especially those darn commas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 thank alot! I get carried away with effects ALOT. and i always forget to capitalize.... THANKS AGAIN 19 views and only one comment?!REDID THE CARDS. ADDED 2. EPIC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Cool pictures! Here's a little nitpick from me: Remember to capitalize the first letter of every word in their titles. As said above, work on your OCG. They're cool cards, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 [quote name='Raptor Slash' timestamp='1303424777' post='5157537'] Cool pictures! Here's a little nitpick from me: Remember to capitalize the first letter of every word in their titles. As said above, work on your OCG. They're cool cards, though! [/quote] THANKS! i thought i did but maybe not. help with ocg?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jreagles14 Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 I want Messanger for Dark World. The first time it died, it would be my card effect that discarded, but the second time it died, it would be my opponent's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 [quote name='jreagles14' timestamp='1303425468' post='5157561'] I want Messanger for Dark World. The first time it died, it would be my card effect that discarded, but the second time it died, it would be my opponent's effect. [/quote] the first time it dies it would go to your opponent. but, the drawing is universal so sure...the computer wuz stupid and added copies.....arg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godzillaiscool Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 The drawings are very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 thanks godzilliscool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 edited!!!!!! 99 views and like 7 comments??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Theyre great cards!!!!!!!!!!!.............. but it would be better if you put real types on the cards for example...... on the "Rusher" its type is "Thunder" you should put it as a "beast" type.(look on some REAL monster cards on the net if your stuck for "Types!)" Try to keep that in,mind next time you make some cards!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [quote name='cool_boy_jon1313' timestamp='1303497147' post='5159758'] Theyre great cards!!!!!!!!!!!.............. but it would be better if you put real types on the cards for example...... on the "Rusher" its type is "Thunder" you should put it as a "beast" type.(look on some REAL monster cards on the net if your stuck for "Types!)" Try to keep that in,mind next time you make some cards!!!!! [/quote] Thunder is a type. the reason it is is because it reminded me of a thunder unicorn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MibeR Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 next time, you must post a lore/effect. to make us easy when fix the OCG. you have the potential to be a good card maker. just be creative Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moatcastle Posted April 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 ok thanks for the comment...ill post the lores sometime in the future... just so busy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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