·Toot Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [center][img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/center][center] [/center][center][quote]This card cannot be Set. If you control a face-up Warrior-Type monster other than "Mountain Marauder, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. You can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster to have this card gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If this card destroys a monster by battle, this card is switched to Defense Position. Once per turn f this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another Warrior-Type monster you control instead.[/quote][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][color="#00FF00"]How Is It?[/color][/center][center][color="#FF0000"]OCG Fixes Appreciated[/color][/center][center][color="#800080"]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [color="#0000FF"]This card cannot be Set [color="#FF0000"][Sounds bad. Don't put it]. [/color]If you control a face-up Warrior-Type monster other than "Mountain Marauder, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. You can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster to have this card gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly [color="#FF0000"][Why ever not?]. [/color]If this card destroys a monster by battle, this card is switched to Defense Position [color="#FF0000"][So since there's a side effect to this card, that you can't attack directly, you get ANOTHER side effect which is more or less guaranteed destruction?]. [/color]Once per turn if this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another Warrior-Type monster you control instead.[/color] I would make it: If you control a face-up Warrior-Type monster other than "Mountain Marauder, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. You can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster to have this card gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If this card [b]attacks your opponent directly[/b], this card is switched to Defense Position. Once per turn [b]i[/b]f this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another Warrior-Type monster you control instead. Good card just a strange bit of UP there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 thnx for the fb its not really guaranteed if you have another warrior on your field and i dont think it needs to be set since the ATK can go up exponentially the turn it is special summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Yeah, but it should be able to attack directly. Maybe make it so that it cannot attack the turn it is special summoned? The whole "can't be set" thing is just not needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 well i put he couldn't attack directly because i though it might be Op'ed that he can get 3000 LP the turn he is special summoned and there would be another monster that could most likely attack directly as well. Thats a lot of damage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Just make sure it says he can't attack the turn he's special summoned..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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