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THE SACRED BEAST


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Hi, this is my second set of cards, first the monster cards:

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Frankly, I got to agree with Blaze.
I can give a few pointer though.

Use other cards as templates. By this I mean: Use their effects to see how the OCG works. Not COPY their effects but destroyed by battle has no capital letters.
Also, names should not be in capital letters.
Sacred Beasts are already cards.
Types should not be in CAPITAL LETTERS
Effects are a bit simple and a tad OP
some pics are a bit inappropriate no?
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I had a long list typed up for everycard but comp glitched so... yea
Remove alot of the Cannot be killed BS
alot of tuners have op effect
Caribidis is rigged... nothing like stall fields kill free 500 dmg... unless you luck draw a noblemen of crossout or waste yoru monsters/battle dmg to lightning vortex this thing
trojan walls - same problem as brontes, traditionally 4k = 3 saq (ob/dreadroot) only exception is exod and he requires a 2 sac monster to be on the field
Odysseus either a free card reveal, or a free card reveal and destroy on the field convenent if your about to Syncro...
Zeus - Blantant op is blantant
Posiden - why was this not zeus when you syncroed?
Hades - same problem as Posiden
Brontes - a 4k beaststick is a little high...
Tifeous - effect might as well be "you win the duel"
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