Glorious eXcess Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 here it ishttp://yugiohcardmaker.net/createcard.php?name=Aelic-%20Birdbound%20Warrior&cardtype=Monster&divine=false&effect=true&attribute=Wind&level=4&magictraptype=None&rarity=Rare&picture=http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/Gold.jpg&set1=DOJO&set2=00001&type=Winged-%20Beast&description=You%20may%20place%201%20Feather%20Counter%20on%20this%20card%20each%20turn.%20For%20each%201%20of%20these%20counters%20on%20this%20card%2C%20this%20card%20loses%20100%20ATK%20and%20DEF%20points.%20If%20this%20card%20has%20more%20than%203%20Feather%20Counters%2C%20destroy%20this%20card%20and%20inflict%20400%20points%20of%20damage%20to%20all%20player's%20Life%20Points.%20If%20there%20are%20multiple%20copies%20of%20this%20card%20in%20your%20Deck%2C%20you%20can%20Special%20Summon%20all%20of%20them%20in%20your%20next%20Battle%20Phase.%20If%20you%20do%2C%20you%20must%20remove%20them%20from%20play%20in%20your%202nd%20Standby%20Phase.&circulation=&atk=1800&def=1200&creator=Frunk's%20Servant&year=2008&serial=14926668im too lazy to go to photobucket or whatever please rate and critisize Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 theres a few grammar errors such as too many spaces, not leaving gaps between words etc. ocg seems fine and theres a weird character inserted in the last few lines. oh and being really picky the type "winged- beast" should be "winged-beast". make these changes and we may just have a winner :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted February 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 oh, ok....thats lame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Don't really like it.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted February 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 explain why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 ..... :( ... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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