Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 I made the first two cards for a contest, and made a new one. These cards revolve around removing themselve from play, then coming back and inflicting damage. If there are a lot of comments, I will make more. Servant of Doom's last line is "This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF."[spoiler= servant of death][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/120m2yb.jpg[/IMG][spoiler=lore]When this card is removed from play by one of your own card effects, Special Summon this card and discard your whole hand. Then, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards you discarded x300.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler= Lurking Doom] [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/15zjpti.jpg[/img][spoiler=lore]Pay 4000 Life Points. Remove from play all monsters on the field, regardless of their position. For each card removed from play by this cards effect, inflict 200 points of damge to your opponent. When this card is added from your Graveyard to your hand, you may destroy a face up DARK attribute monster.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler= Servant of Doom] [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/k9th60.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]If this card is removed from play, immediatly Special Summon it. Then, you can pay 1000 life points to destroy all field spell cards on the field, and add a "Lurking Doom" spell card from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is removed from play by the effect of "Lurking Doom", gain 3000 life points. When this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Post the lore please. Then I'll have a proper look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kito Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Where do you make cards how did u get them so big? post lore plz. love pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 Thanks, I thought you guys could read them without lore, but I'll post it [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif[/img]. This is Touma's template (Or is it a different name?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 COMMENT!! PLEASE! BUMMMMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 Don't make me do this again.. BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted May 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 Please Comment!! BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 You aren't using the right fonts, are you? Well, here's your review. Images: 8/10 Good. OCG: 17/20 Some minor errors, I'm too lazy to correct them now. Balance: 20/30 I see an OTK: 0. Make you have at least 100 LP more than the LP of your opponent rounded off upwards (for example, your opponent has 5300 LP, make you have 6100 LP). 1. Special Summon Servant of Doom. 2. Activate Soul Absorbation. 3. Activate Lurking Doom. Servant of Doom is Special Summoned. 4. Attack directly. 5. Activate the effect of Servant of Doom 6. Repeat from step 3 until you win. Originality: 34/40 Total: 84% Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 thanks for comment. bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Blue- Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 I really like these cards. Apart from some OCG errors, I think they're great. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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