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jaraide

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Very good, few errors
First of all, where you wrote "Ultimate Rare" is where the words Special Edition or First Edition go, if anything is there.
Secondly, you wrote "2001 Konami", which is either reserved for 2011 Jairade or 1996 Kazuki Takahashi.
Thirdly, where you wrote 65756-76765 should be the set and number. Ex: STBL-37 or Star Strike Blast-Card No. 37
Lastly, you shouldn't write "This card is a fusion of," instead just write: Obelisk the Tormentor + Slifer the Sky Dragon + The Winged Dragon of Ra
Your OCG and effect are good though, but change monster spirit to Divine Beast.
Score: 5.5/10
With revisions to card: 7.5/10
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